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An Orchid

warm whiffs embrace, ardent blaze; flickering flame awakes an ache. tame harmony, into romantic lust, burst orchid fragrance in darken moment, amid midnight twilight. passion sound roaring thunder within, warm cinders soothe budding moment. like there’s no tomorrow. silence gently fades breathless in cascade release. 6/5/2020 Some Kind Of Sensual Poetry Contest Sponsored by: nette onclaud 45 words

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Date: 6/6/2020 6:43:00 PM
I love the idea of twilight at midnight...congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/6/2020 7:06:00 AM
This is lovely.. I love orchids.. so fragile and sensual..
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Date: 6/6/2020 12:56:00 AM
Love your orchid poem, Eve. Best wishes in Nette's contest. Hugs ~ John
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Date: 6/5/2020 3:58:00 PM
Definitely sensual without exceeding the limits of restraint, Eve. Regards & Hugs // paul
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Date: 6/5/2020 2:41:00 PM
- I have a unique orchid ... it's at least 14/16 years and flowers all year ... (not many flowers ... 3-5 on one branch ... but I don't have the heart to throw it :) - A lovely poems, Eve ... best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/5/2020 1:21:00 PM
beautifully sensual Eve I adore orchids and have many growing in my lounge I currently have 8 in flower:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 6/5/2020 1:10:00 PM
Well written sensual verse, just read Pauls below, his was about the orchid too. Good luck in the contest Hope alls well Tom
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Date: 6/5/2020 1:07:00 PM
Eve great imagery and effort penned here. Creativity at its best. I will be surprised if this doesn't win. Early congratulations one of my favorites.
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