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An optical profusion

an early summer storm white flurries over the lawn- ah,the philedelphus blossoms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/17/2011 7:05:00 AM
That happens in Canada often Brian but at the moment it is lovely, except today of course, because I am off, it is raining, a good day to write poetry and I want to thank you so much ,for my FIRST PLACE, in your One Off contest, I am so very honored and as I say in the poem, it changed my life forever and I am pleased to finally dust it off and share it. I love your contests, keep them coming, so inspriting and so much fun~~
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Date: 6/16/2011 1:57:00 PM
Is this a new type of Haiku with more than 17 syllables? quite a new for me. Brian
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Date: 6/16/2011 1:02:00 PM
a beautiful write, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.
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Date: 6/16/2011 12:10:00 PM
Wonderful imagery here Brian,,,enjoyed.
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Date: 6/16/2011 11:43:00 AM
Pretty..............nice dreamy imagery!!!!ENJOYED~God bless you Brian~ ^Rick
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