An Optical Profusion

an early summer storm
white flurries over the lawn-
ah,the philedelphus blossoms
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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June 17, 2011 at 7:05 AM
That happens in Canada often Brian but at the moment it is lovely, except today of course, because I am off, it is raining, a good day to write poetry and I want to thank you so much ,for my FIRST PLACE, in your One Off contest, I am so very honored and as I say in the poem, it changed my life forever and I am pleased to finally dust it off and share it. I love your contests, keep them coming, so inspriting and so much fun~~
Mehta Avatar
June 16, 2011 at 1:57 PM
Is this a new type of Haiku with more than 17 syllables? quite a new for me. Brian
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June 16, 2011 at 1:02 PM
a beautiful write, enjoyed your haiku,..p.d.
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June 16, 2011 at 12:10 PM
Wonderful imagery here Brian,,,enjoyed.
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