Stephen Tefft Poet Rhyme

An Open Field of Weeds

an open field of weeds
above I can see starlit skies
a woman with piercing blue eyes
stands close within my dream
we watch the blue moon start to rise

5/15/2019
Theme 3: a dream
Writing Challenge 2, May 2019, Lind68868 Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart
Placed 1st (One of nine incredible 1st place winners. Congrats to all the others as well!)

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Andrea Dietrich May 24, 2019 at 7:30 PM this is really beautiful. Congrats for the well deserved win. Stephen Tefft May 24, 2019 at 7:52 PM I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

Connie Marcum Wong May 24, 2019 at 6:45 PM Ah, romance and nature entwined exquisitely. Congratulations on your deserving first placement Stephen! : ) Stephen Tefft May 24, 2019 at 6:48 PM Thanks. They were all quite well done.

Robert Lindley May 24, 2019 at 2:43 PM Congratulations on your win in Dear Heart's Lind68868 contest my friend! God bless.... Robert Stephen Tefft May 24, 2019 at 6:48 PM Thank you.

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2019 at 12:08 PM - Congratulations on a great first place in this contest :) - // Sun :) Stephen Tefft May 21, 2019 at 12:13 PM Thanks. I appreciate it.

Constance La France May 21, 2019 at 9:26 AM Stephen, congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this excellent poem ! Stephen Tefft May 21, 2019 at 11:05 AM Thank you so much!

P.S. Awtry May 20, 2019 at 2:33 PM Well done! Congratulations! Stephen Tefft May 20, 2019 at 10:03 PM Thanks! Now what do I do?

Nancy Beckman May 19, 2019 at 7:52 PM What a great image, thanks for sharing, good luck in the contest! Stephen Tefft May 20, 2019 at 7:11 AM Thank you, Nancy.