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An Oncoming Asteroid

Got abdominal pains, could mean a poop Take heed or you'll soon be poopin' in your suit Something to avoid A gigantic asteroid Sometimes accompanied by a big log to boot

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Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 10/9/2017 8:52:00 AM

You may be getting annoyed//by a different kind of "roid"//Preparation H is needed//should be heeded// and rapidly deployed. VOID ON ACTION JACKSON!!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/9/2017 8:57:00 AM

AH ha! Got my roids mixed up!!! HOPE YOUR DAY IS A SMASHING SUCCESS!!!

Silent One

Date: 10/9/2017 7:21:00 AM

Hahaha! Such crude humour!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/9/2017 7:38:00 AM

CRUDE??? Don't know what you could possibly mean?

Russell Sivey

Date: 10/9/2017 6:28:00 AM

Ha! This one is VERY comical my friend, you have surely tickled my funny bone with this write my friend! You are writing some great poetry lately, seems you don't have writers block at all! You are lucky, I sort-of have somewhat of a writers block right now...too much on my mind I guess, plus there is a pain in my back, Ha! What a stunning piece, Great Work!!

Jack Ellison
Date: 10/9/2017 6:32:00 AM

So how is your recovery coming along, fine sir???