An Oncoming Asteroid

Got abdominal pains, could mean a poop Take heed or you'll soon be poopin' in your suit Something to avoid A gigantic asteroid Sometimes accompanied by a big log to boot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Flats Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:52 AM
You may be getting annoyed//by a different kind of "roid"//Preparation H is needed//should be heeded// and rapidly deployed. VOID ON ACTION JACKSON!!!
Ellison Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 8:57 AM
AH ha! Got my roids mixed up!!! HOPE YOUR DAY IS A SMASHING SUCCESS!!!
One Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 7:21 AM
Hahaha! Such crude humour!
Ellison Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 7:38 AM
CRUDE??? Don't know what you could possibly mean?
Sivey Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:28 AM
Ha! This one is VERY comical my friend, you have surely tickled my funny bone with this write my friend! You are writing some great poetry lately, seems you don't have writers block at all! You are lucky, I sort-of have somewhat of a writers block right now...too much on my mind I guess, plus there is a pain in my back, Ha! What a stunning piece, Great Work!!
Ellison Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 6:32 AM
So how is your recovery coming along, fine sir???
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace