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An Ollyver Visitation Memory

An Ollyver's Visitation Memory One night my dear dog – long gone - appeared as I slept. Waking, I saw him on my bed! Into my arms he leapt! With joy and surprise I pressed my face into his long soft fur. Oh,it felt much too real to have only been a dream! Oct. 23, 2017 For the "Dust Off a Memory" Contest of Broken Wings

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Date: 11/11/2017 2:57:00 PM
love this & I know it's a true story too x
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Date: 10/30/2017 10:26:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Date: 10/30/2017 9:27:00 AM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely dream poem. I often have a dream about my cat, Patches coming to curl up on my chest (her fav place at night) and I could feel her heart beat right on mine, ok wiping away tears now !
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Date: 10/30/2017 7:46:00 AM
A lovely dream..Congrats on your win Andrea
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Date: 10/29/2017 6:37:00 PM
Oh, I have had similar dreams about my cat, Andrea. Such a disappointment to wake and find it not true. You have expressed it so well in your poem. Congrats on your fine placement. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/29/2017 12:16:00 PM
I very difficult Form for this type of contest and yet once again you nailed it! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 10/29/2017 9:30:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Thanks for sharing such a precious memory. Congratulations on your placement in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 10/29/2017 9:07:00 AM
Congrats, Andrea, well deserved! John
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Date: 10/26/2017 5:37:00 AM
Brought tears! Made me think of my sister’s dog who passed away. Hugs Kim
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Date: 10/24/2017 4:41:00 PM
Dreams are, indeed, real. Anyone who has ever dreamed lucidly, is in on the spooky secret.
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Date: 10/24/2017 3:21:00 PM
This is exceptionally good Andrea, so hard to get the syllable count right, you make it look so easy, you are so talented, GL in contest. :))
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Date: 10/24/2017 6:10:00 AM
You do the syllable forms very well Andrea.. This is a very good Fibonacci..
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Date: 10/24/2017 4:31:00 AM
Great poem, Andrea, this looks like a winner to me! Good luck. John ~
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Date: 10/23/2017 11:12:00 PM
This is so sweet Andrea. His little spirit visited you in your dreams. I know you miss him. Hugs, Connie: )
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Date: 10/23/2017 9:10:00 PM
This is so sweet, sometimes dreams feel so so real, loved this1
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