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In this new century of our Lord The gardener planted the young tree Placed in garden of Gethsemane An olive to the knee Around two thousand years have passed A beaten path close by Each word the Olive tucks away Within its heart with sighs When Jesus was just a small boy He would come some to play His tender hand caressed its limbs Alluring light display Twenty-one years passed swiftly by When He came once again Deep in prayer to His Father Then said a soft Amen Most times He came to the garden He touched my bark and roots Once He cried tears with sweat of blood Not heard by His recruits A crowd of soldiers came for Him They lead Him fast away Out of my presence departed In my heart ever stay Some rumors that they crucified Him Twisted my trunk and heart My heart longs for His tender touch He'll come to not depart The disciples in great fear came Whispering in great shame Their leader lies in the cold tomb His name being defamed On Sunday two women named Mary By the olive tree came Joyous excitement jubilation Jesus lives~ proclaim

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Date: 4/27/2025 3:33:00 AM
You have covered the entire gamut of Jesus' life from the garden of Gethsemane to his crucifixion and resurrection. As a tourist, when we visited the garden, I could see the gnarled trunks of many old olive trees. Spot on around Easter!
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Date: 4/26/2025 9:37:00 PM
This is a great poem on Jesus and his resurrection. You made it fresh by personifying the tree
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Date: 4/20/2025 10:31:00 AM
Dear Sara, you have penned a lovely poem. Happy Easter.
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Date: 4/19/2025 1:39:00 PM
Alleluia! Amen! Sara! What a wonderful story of the olive tree and so beautifully written! This touched a chord deep in my heart. I would love to see this published as a short story! I think you have a winner here. It is soooo creative and very beautiful. I am so glad this is part of my Easter celebration. Definitely a fav! Easter joy!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/19/2025 3:20:00 PM
Sam, I am honored that you would fav this and I am delighted that it touched you in a spiritual way. Thank you so much. Sara K
Date: 4/18/2025 11:57:00 PM
OLIVE trees have been around for centuries, it would stand to reason that Jesus stroked the trunk of this tree in the garden of Gethsemenee . Old Olive trees have much to tell us from centuries back. Jesus probably hugged this Olive trees in this very holy garden which has so much significance When our LORD was crucified it twisted the inside branches of this olive tree but oh what joy when on Easter Day Jesus rose from his grave and presented himself to the two Marys. Happy Easter Sara. Love blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 4/18/2025 4:48:00 PM
Working on a new piece. His name is "I AM" I'm working on changing that name to "I DID" because of this holiday we are having. It's always good to redo a piece. Improvements always make it better.
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/18/2025 5:25:00 PM
Thank you, John. I appreciate the nice review of my work. Sara K
Date: 4/18/2025 12:23:00 PM
this work raises the bar, sara...very symbolic, which you regally penned ! happy easter
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/18/2025 5:27:00 PM
Why, thank you, Nette. I appreciate the visit with such a nice review. Sara K
Date: 4/16/2025 1:43:00 PM
All praise be to the King.'
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/18/2025 5:32:00 PM
I am delighted that it brought praises to your mind, Joe. Your comments are much appreciated. Sara K
Date: 4/16/2025 5:01:00 AM
How beautiful is your poem her dear sara, so touching how youv done storytelling! Hope you are well and easter holidays treat you well? What are your plans with family? Pleasure visiting your page today dear sara. Sending you light today and always
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/18/2025 5:29:00 PM
IE, my daughter who has young granddaughters has a nice day planned. Sara K
Date: 4/15/2025 5:24:00 PM
Very nice,Sara! Happy Easter! One day, the next surprise, when He returns with all His glory! Amen!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/18/2025 5:31:00 PM
Yes, some glad morning we shall hear His voice calling us to come home. Thanks for the nice review. Sara K
Date: 4/15/2025 7:38:00 AM
so lovely and touching poem, don't forget him best wishes
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/18/2025 5:28:00 PM
I am delighted that you found it lovely, Yann. Your visits are uplifting. Sara K
Date: 4/14/2025 11:07:00 AM
- Amen - Lovely written, Sara :) - I wish you and your family a nice Easter weekend :) - hugs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/18/2025 5:28:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise. I hope it is a wonderful weekend for you and yours as well. Sara K

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