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An Old Woman

Beneath the shade of an old oak tree, there sat an old woman completely free, humming and singing an unfamiliar song, with sounds so sweet and words not long. Her white sun-kissed hair blowing like a running mare on the tails of the wind, and her tan leathery skin, draped with a dress vibrant in colors and apparently unpressed. A spell she cast on me as I sat near, how lovely, how serene, with smells of sweet flowers awakening in the spring. A warmth filled my soul as I closed my eyes, how peaceful was the never-ending blue sky. I could stay there for hours, no time was addressed, I had no where to be and, I needed the rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/6/2012 5:59:00 AM
This is explicitly awesome. I love the piece so much and I think I will be checking on your other wonderful works... Its a blessing coming to your page and I hope you do well to stop by too. Once again, nice work.
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Kathleen Stevens
Date: 6/6/2012 12:16:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind words and for reading!! I have read some of your work and enjoyed!! Happy writing!!
Date: 6/2/2012 3:50:00 PM
This is beautiful Kathleen!! Enjoyed this very much.
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Kathleen Stevens
Date: 6/6/2012 12:17:00 PM
thank you very much for reading and leaving a comment. It is encouraging!!
Date: 5/31/2012 2:52:00 PM
Lovely, lovely and lovely..this is a heartfelt write..love the imagery here as well..regards INK-U-SCRIPT
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Kathleen Stevens
Date: 6/1/2012 5:39:00 PM
Thank you very much!!! Happy writing!!
Date: 5/31/2012 2:49:00 PM
Kathleen, I love this poem... so sweet. - oxox love and welcome from Anne-Lise
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Kathleen Stevens
Date: 6/1/2012 5:40:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words!! They are much appreciated!!
Date: 5/30/2012 5:40:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be Kathleen. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Kathleen Stevens
Date: 5/30/2012 1:29:00 PM
Thank you very much Carol for the lovely words and welcoming greeting!!
Date: 5/29/2012 6:12:00 PM
I really loved this microscopic study of an obviously charismatic character, who seems just totally subconciously shared a precious moment within a perfect day... wonderful piece ...tyvm karen
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Kathleen Stevens
Date: 5/30/2012 1:30:00 PM
Thank you Karen!! Your words are greatly appreciated!!!
Date: 5/29/2012 5:44:00 PM
Very nice work here poet, good word imagery, rhyme scheme is nice, well done
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Kathleen Stevens
Date: 5/30/2012 1:31:00 PM
Thank you Michael!! See you around....

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