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Write Four Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 03/08/2025

"Elderly, check. Arthritis in both knees, check. Shocks world in doubt, check." ---quote by poet. Counted out before the marathon began. Far from first, second, or third in the race, Yet kept pushing through pain and fatigue; Proved everyone wrong, finishing with slow pace.

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Date: 3/12/2025 8:24:00 PM
attaboy, that's life. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
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Date: 3/8/2025 1:11:00 PM
Nice one Edward. Perserverance and finishing.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 3/8/2025 1:19:00 PM
Thank you very much, Oliver: -)

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