An Old Man Works Summer's Garden

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This is not a picture of whom I am writing but the garden looks similar. 

Down where the willow trees blossoms 
And the pear blooms white as snow
Old man works a garden that is awesome
He's worn out from years of work that was gusto
 
And the pear blooms white as snow
Touched by God's sweet kindness and grace
He's worn out from years of work that was gusto
There'll be a pear crop in this place

Touched by God's sweet kindness and grace
Old man works a garden that is awesome
There'll be a pear crop in this place
Down where the willow tree blossoms

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 12/28/2020 7:47:00 AM
Hi Sara, This is lovely! Congratulations on your win. Have a nice day:-) Alexis
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2020 8:38:00 AM
Alexis, Your visit is uplifting ..Thanks for the congrats. Sara
Date: 12/27/2020 3:45:00 PM
Your poem is so beautiful, it could be a song, Sara. It's a Fave. Congratulations on your win. :=)
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2020 3:37:00 AM
Evelyn, Thanks for dropping by with congrats. I am honored that you would fav my work. Sara
Date: 12/27/2020 2:37:00 PM
Looks like he has a green thumb, no greater pleasure then working a garden, congrats dear friend, on a poem well written , well delivered xo
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/28/2020 3:34:00 AM
Mystic, We both used to get out there and do the work but alas time takes it toll. Thanks for the nice comment and saying congrats. Sara
Date: 12/27/2020 1:42:00 PM
Hi Sara, Thanks for taking part in this contest. Your attention to meter and rhyme made it a smooth read and a deserving winner. Dave
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 12/27/2020 2:26:00 PM
D.W., Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. I appreciate you dropping by to let me know. Sara
Date: 4/19/2015 2:06:00 PM
Sorry that I am so late on the congrats, just recently found out the contest was finalized.. Big congrats on your win!!
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:34:00 PM
Sara, congratulations on your awesome win. Luv LINDA
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Date: 4/14/2015 11:56:00 AM
So nice to read your poetry this morning. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 4/13/2015 11:01:00 AM
Congrats on a fine win Sara
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Date: 4/4/2015 9:49:00 PM
Happy Easter Sara -- God and nature! Love it. 7
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Date: 4/4/2015 10:06:00 AM
Being a country girl, I can relate to all of these wonderful poems, and it is if you were looking out from my own yard! And yes....this country gardener has runny eyes and nose, but you can't keep me indoors!! Love all three poems, Sara!
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Date: 4/4/2015 7:35:00 AM
This is top-notch work, Sarah...Keep sharing.
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