An Old Man Fishing

I watched the old man mosey to his favorite fishing spot.
Ahead of him his faithful dog capered at a lively trot.
No fancy fishing lures for him, just a simple bamboo pole,
And a can of worms as content he seemed in heart and soul!

Settling in the welcome shade of a spreading oak,
He lit his pipe for a pleasurable afternoon smoke.
His old dog lay contentedly at the old man's feet.
What a life!  How could it be any more complete!

At fishing the old fellow was extremely deft.
Why, he was pulling them in right and left!
With all the expensive lures that I had at hand,
Not one consarned fish did I ever land!

As the sun waned he lay back and took off his shoes,
To savor his usual afternoon snooze.
Imagine my dismay as his bobber danced about!
(Why can't I reel in some of those wily trout?)

As the sun settled in the west he called it a day.
(Alas, I still hadn't had a nibble, I must say!)
He waved asking, "How's your fishin' luck been?"
"Not a bite" I replied, much to my chagrin!

Placed No. 1 in Paula Swanson's "The Allure Of A Lure Is Alluring" Contest - Apr 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 2/21/2015 1:33:00 AM
G'day Robert... You virtually wrote my book 'Lindsay Laurie's fishing yarns' - and I'm not the old man. Enjoyed this poem Robert. Lindsay
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Date: 4/5/2012 11:04:00 AM
Top of the pack, Robert! Well deserved win! CONGRATS:)
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Date: 4/5/2012 7:33:00 AM
Robert,.....simply superb.......congrats on the top placement in the contest!!!!!!!!!!!!!~sashi
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Date: 4/5/2012 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations Robert! I pictured it all as it was happening! :)
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Date: 4/5/2012 5:58:00 AM
A belated congratulations to you for your win in Paula's "Allure" contest Bob. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/4/2012 11:52:00 PM
Awesome win, Robert. BIG congratulations on this well written poem on a "lure"
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Date: 4/4/2012 1:40:00 PM
Well done Bob. I was never much of a fisherman but if I could have a day like your fisherman, I might take it up. Mike
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Date: 4/4/2012 12:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your first. Wonderful poem, it reminds of fishing with my grandfather 50+ years ago.
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Date: 4/4/2012 12:40:00 AM
Congrtulations Bob, brings back memories of fishing with my brother I had the stick and pin, he had the kit, i caught the fish...xx
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:59:00 PM
Oh yeah, Rob... been there done that... I think they have a kinship with nemo or something! Well written experience and i felt your pain.... no really! I have felt your pain! haha
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Date: 3/9/2012 5:50:00 PM
this is charming! i love the rhyming of "been" and "chagrin." best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/9/2012 3:52:00 PM
LOL, a surefire winner here, Bob. Hope you both have a great weekend and that Vera is doing well on her treatment
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Date: 3/9/2012 2:54:00 PM
Yes a complete life he have . . . . lovely....- thank you for this poem today Bob. - Hope for "a bite" in contest for you. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 3/9/2012 12:41:00 PM
Oh and i hope you do well in the contest..)
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Date: 3/9/2012 12:40:00 PM
Was your face "a lurid shade" despite the tree's shade Bob.? ha ha..) enjoyed the flail of this fishermans tale today..!
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