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An old man contemplating desire

The girls look just as good today as they did at age seventeen You still long to ask them for date the desire every bit as keen. But now you are no longer young Your belly fat, and thin your hair A long long way from "love's young dream" Headed to decline and despair So you start to talk, not knowing where to start, or quite where this ends and find the delight of seeing young women as comrades and friends. Don't cry when romance turns the page There's a wisdom that comes with age.

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Date: 11/21/2023 1:09:00 PM
Congrats on your win Tom, very nicely penned
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Tom Pickering
Date: 11/21/2023 3:53:00 PM
Thanks!
Date: 11/20/2023 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Tom. Enjoyed your sonnet. Wisdom may come with age. But the spirit is willing and the flesh is weak.
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Tom Pickering
Date: 11/21/2023 3:53:00 PM
Sadly true! :)

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