An old man contemplating desire

The girls look just as good today
as they did at age seventeen
You still long to ask them for date
the desire every bit as keen.

But now you are no longer young
Your belly fat, and thin your hair
A long long way from "love's young dream"
Headed to decline and despair

So you start to talk, not knowing
where to start, or quite where this ends
and find the delight of seeing
young women as comrades and friends.

Don't cry when romance turns the page
There's a wisdom that comes with age.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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May Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 1:09 PM
Congrats on your win Tom, very nicely penned
Pickering Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Thanks!
Hargreaves Avatar
November 20, 2023 at 11:32 AM
Thanks Tom. Enjoyed your sonnet. Wisdom may come with age. But the spirit is willing and the flesh is weak.
Pickering Avatar
November 21, 2023 at 3:53 PM
Sadly true! :)
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