An Offering of Sight

I yearn for sleep
the kind you get
when you wake up
wondering at the day,
when your dreams
are outlandish journeys
that never end

Where your world
is the best of spent youth,
and the exclusion of time
heals the soul that grieves,
at the first deep breath
stars fall into your eyes,
where the ringing phone
is a call from your Mum,
and the knock on the door
is lost family coming home

I long for slumber
to see those I ache for,
to embrace them
with a fantasist's kiss

for knowledge Odin
gave his eye,
for sleep
I offer both
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Agustin Avatar
January 25, 2024 at 7:11 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Turner Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 7:51 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem this morning, Jayne. Without sleep seems like nothing goes right the entire day.
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