An Offering
I offer you a glance
And our eyes instantly lock.
An unexpected shiver runs through me
And time stands still on the clock.
I offer you my hand
And you take it warmly into yours.
No words have to be spoken
Yet we have opened so many doors.
I offer you a dance
And our bodies meld together.
We are both in awe and astonished,
Both wanting this to last forever.
I offer you a kiss
Which makes us quiver in delight.
The passion and the pleasure
Intensifies through the night.
I offer you my heart
and I trust that you won't break.
To fall in glorious love
is a risk we yearn to take.
3/6/2009
~Posting my first poem had me feeling both nervous and excited, would other poets like my poem, and I was happy knowing others were reading my words, getting warm comments was the best feeling ever~
Copyright © Cecilia Macfarlane | Year Posted 2009
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