An Ode To the Thighs

The mountain, it was steep.
The snow was very deep.
Caused involuntary “ahs”
from anyone who saw.

To get up to the top
was not some little hop.
It took tram, chair and poma
to tackle that big momma.

To start from the summit,
a near vertical plummet,
took the heart of a lion,
and left most people cryin’.

He checks skis, boots and poles,
but really he just knows,
he’s putting off the trauma,
the approaching descent drama.

It’s really exhilarating.
His heart is fibrillating.
He sucks up, screams and GOES,
and attacks the chest-deep snow.

It’s man against the mountain.
On his wits he is a countin’,
for to miss one little turn,
means a faceload full of burn.

He turns, he slips, he sails.
It seems he never fails,
to again make it down,
to that quaint little town.

With heart so pure and strong,
it doesn’t take too long.
He’ll never give up the fight
to conquer fields of white.

He goes again, again
The battle he does win
between the fields of snow
and our mighty hero.

The day comes to an end.
Misfortunes do portend.
Our hero’s not come in –
Good god, what’s happenin’?

A cry goes through the town.
Our hero has gone down.
The patrolman are a scurryin’.
The crowds they are a worryin’.

My gosh, good god, oh my
catch a glimpse as he goes by.
Our hero’s on a gurney.
Why’s he on this journey?

Is he hurt – did he crash?
His head a tree did bash?
Please say it isn’t so
Come on, we gotta know.

Speculation runs a flutter.
The crowds they stand and mutter,
with faces stained by tear,
they say “Please help us here”.

The data is a mess.
His friends they won’t confess.
So people stand and stare
at their seeming lack of care.

On his buds there is no frown -
just big smiles all around.
They don’t understand the cries -
he merely thrashed his thighs.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 1/29/2014 8:36:00 AM
Hi Mark....Welcome to Poetry Soup!!!..you made an awesome poem ,dear... I hope you enjoy the great experience as you go beyond writing poems...i'm sure you'll love the people here..they are so kind and very supportive...Good luck to your journey in poetry world!!! ..always..AiyaH :0)
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Date: 1/29/2014 10:45:00 AM
Thanks a lot AiyaH. The people here seem very supportive and I like that. Hope that I can contribute to this community. Mark
Date: 1/19/2014 6:25:00 PM
Mark, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 1/19/2014 9:59:00 PM
Thanks for the welcome Linda. Glad to be here. Seems like a good group of folks here so I hope to contribute a lot. Mark
Date: 1/19/2014 8:39:00 AM
all for the strength of the thigh... a fun piece that i love to to read to the final line...
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Date: 1/19/2014 9:58:00 PM
Yeah I had fun writing this little Ode Weston. Glad that you liked it. Hope I can give you more stuff that you will enjoy. Thanks for hooking up. Mark
Date: 1/19/2014 7:56:00 AM
amazing Ode Mark. , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 1/19/2014 9:57:00 PM
Glad you liked my little Ode Skat. I wrote it for my brother who loves to ski - and we go up a lot. His favorite is powder and he is always complaining on a good day about his thrashed thighs. Good guy to ski with. I hope get more involved in this community - so you will be hearing more from me. Mark
Date: 1/19/2014 6:34:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Mark- I choose your first nice ode poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/19/2014 9:54:00 PM
Thanks a lot Anne-Lise. I am glad to be here and I hope to contribute a lot to the community. I certainly like what I see so far. Mark
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