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An Ode To Romance

The sweetness of your lips, like chocolate on a fingertip Your touch is much needed, it gives me that steadfast feelin Your smile blows me away Like an island breeze on a scorching day Your passion is addictive, my love is submissive Loving you is monumental, so please be gentle with my heart and dreams So it seems, that I am satisfied Because the right guy is by my side

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/14/2010 3:34:00 PM
Great work! So much passion and emotion I love the rhyme and your words are beautiful. Amazing!
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Date: 9/20/2010 6:53:00 AM
Bravo for you. Welcome to poetrysoup. Drop by any time, my friend
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Date: 9/19/2010 3:13:00 PM
HELLO~ JAMILA ~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~He HE HE! Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read more poems, before my KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you guys. I posted a sad poem as well, hope you find time to read my latest poem*luv~SKAT
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