Jamila Strong Poet Couplet

An Ode To Romance

The sweetness of your lips, like chocolate on a fingertip
Your touch is much needed, it gives me that steadfast feelin
Your smile blows me away
Like an island breeze on a scorching day
Your passion is addictive, my love is submissive
Loving you is monumental, so please be gentle
with my heart and dreams
So it seems, that I am satisfied
Because the right guy is by my side

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Audonus Taylor November 14, 2010 at 3:34 PM Great work! So much passion and emotion I love the rhyme and your words are beautiful. Amazing!

David Smalling September 20, 2010 at 6:53 AM Bravo for you. Welcome to poetrysoup. Drop by any time, my friend

Skat A September 19, 2010 at 3:13 PM HELLO~ JAMILA ~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~He HE HE! Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read more poems, before my KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you guys. I posted a sad poem as well, hope you find time to read my latest poem*luv~SKAT