Notes About The Poem

Poetic Form: Ode

My November Challenge: An Ode to _____ Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich

Entry Submitted: 2025 November 07

Contest Judged: 2025 November 16

Contest Placement: 1st Place

An Ode to My Mouth

A hushed cave,
holding secrets deep.
A folded petal,
never to speak.
A locked treasure chest,
where all memories sleep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Rodrigues Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 3:22 PM
Yet you reveal in your poetry ;) Hugs and congrats!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 17, 2025 at 4:04 PM
Mum's the word, said loudly in lieu of crayons and finger painting, as Cher would sing, "If I could turn..."
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 4:52 PM
Hmmm, I almost thought this could be "the Silent One" if he were still active here. haha. Congrats in my contest. this is a very creative take on one's mouth!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 6:16 PM
I noted upon my return of late, sorely missed, hope all is fair and well with thee. I am truly honored to have made such a rewarding placement in your contest, hence my title remained so non-revealing and as plain as day to cause a wonderment.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 9, 2025 at 2:56 PM
I like this analogy and ode...a unique perspective.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 6:06 PM
Thank you so very much, my friend, Aloha.
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