An Ode To My Eyes

They are one of the smallest
Yet complex part of oneself.
They see, capture and perceive
The splendor of the creation 
Surrounding us.
Even in darkness, they shine.
They exude emotion,
Magnetise and entrance.
If you look at them closely...
You see who I am.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Healey Avatar
November 18, 2025 at 6:47 PM
The eyes are truly the window to the soul. Well done, Natasha. Congrats.
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November 20, 2025 at 6:20 AM
Thank you Jim. I wanted to add that the line about them being windows to the soul but I couldn't get to it. :-)
Dietrich Avatar
November 16, 2025 at 5:27 PM
I love how you personalized it at the very end. Great last line. Everything you wrote was so nice. Congrats in my contest.
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November 20, 2025 at 6:22 AM
Thank you Andrea. I enjoyed your contest idea. It felt unique. Thank you for considering my poem in your wins list. All the best xx
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