Jay Narain Poet Rhyme

An Ode to Love

Oh, love — you sneak in via the fridge,
Claiming one sock, then whisper “bridge”.
You steal the remote and hog the chair,
Yet still grin when I split the fare.
You laugh at my puns, roll at my sighs,
While sneaking chocolate with sweet, wide eyes.
You argue that the dog is yours (again!),
And call the blender “our life-domain”.
Still, when you faint at rom-com’s last scene,
I hand you tissues — love’s behind the green.

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Bj Legros Kelley November 12, 2025 at 3:13 PM This is adorable :) <3 I can't help but smile, the dog is hers, the blender 'ours', and sneaking chocolates with sweet wide eyes, lol, I think that someone deserves a box of chocolates (to share of course ;) for being super lovable as your sweetheart obviously is. Such a cute poem!

Valsa George November 10, 2025 at 8:57 PM "Still, when you faint at rom-com’s last scene, I hand you tissues — love’s behind the green." Love these concluding lines. This is interesting with a touch of hilarity. Greatly enjoyed.

Anne Winter November 10, 2025 at 6:06 PM This is so beautifully written :) wow :)

Kim Rodrigues November 10, 2025 at 4:40 PM Cute one!

Andrea Dietrich November 10, 2025 at 12:40 PM This is so cute. I wonder what inspired you to write an ode. You could write one for my contest!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 10, 2025 at 11:39 AM - Cute and funny, Jay :) - Love it :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith November 10, 2025 at 11:22 AM Your "An Ode to Love" was a joy to read. I really enjoyed this one. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Hope You Have Autumn Blessings As You Write Away.............

Darlene De Beaulieu November 10, 2025 at 10:23 AM Hello Jay, I really enjoyed this poem. This is an Odd to love. blessings my friend. /Darlene/