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An Ode To Insulin

Last night was tremendous, I made love with the super ***** Parted the defense of thick blood, seized the bruised belly You are my guardian angel. You melt the frozen heart. For the odor of your sperm, releases me from the smell of the abyss.

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Date: 12/20/2016 11:14:00 AM

Winda Sari, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@