An Odd Shaped Heart

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                                                         Swan and Gander touch
                                            Heads construct an odd shaped heart
                                                        Love the strangest thing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Oimbo Avatar
October 30, 2010 at 6:00 AM
THE poem is one of the few good written haiku in the world
Chappell Avatar
October 29, 2010 at 1:21 AM
excellent image here my friend thank you duncan
Culverhouse Avatar
October 28, 2010 at 3:26 PM
enjoyed mom!
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October 28, 2010 at 8:03 AM
Hi Sara.Lovely Haiku.And a beautiful idea from your very creative mind.I understand that swans mate for life with the same partner.I think that's wonderful.Mind you they don't have the stresses and strains of life as we do.For one thing they don't have to pay bills,they only have to touch them!!! Love June
Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 8:28 PM
this one my favorite of the three I read tonight. I have always been fascinated in that heart shape that two long bird necks can make! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:39 AM
Interesting haiku with good images, sara
Onclaud Avatar
October 27, 2010 at 6:23 AM
how original and creative.. much enjoyed, sara warmest, nette
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