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For 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 22 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney

An Ocean of Tears

I wonder, as we find ourselves afloat, 
how is it that we have all come to be,
from sites, disparate, far-flung and remote, 
just ashes floating on a lonely sea.

Though, perhaps we've loved, and perhaps we've sinned,
now, we are only life's lost residue,
carried to these waves by an ocean wind. 
Who knows who we were, who to bid adieu?

We meet as strangers on a sea, blue-green, 
beneath sky drawn from a child's crayon hue. 
What if we sail on all that's ever been,
drifting on tears of ev'ry me and you?

Let all these tears, although we've forgot 'em,  
bath us as we settle on the bottom.
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Dietrich Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 3:42 PM
Such lovely imagery here. Was this for one of the contests?
Crandall Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 4:36 PM
Hi Andrea - thanks! It wasn't for a contest, though I may decide to enter it in one of the contests where you can enter any poem. I always have a hard time deciding with those.
Rodgers Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 9:25 AM
Hello David, a quiet elegy, vast and intimate, e a meditation cast adrift where memory, loss, and the mystery of connection ripple through every line. Forgetting is a kind of grace, and the ocean is a cradle for all we’ve been. It’s haunting. Autumn Blessings, David, Daniel
Crandall Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 4:35 PM
Hi Daniel, thanks. I like your comments. I agree with "forgetting is a kind of grace".
Greenhough Avatar
October 14, 2025 at 8:28 PM
This poem is an emotional awakening. Tears in amount vary but sadness is pervasive anyway. The metaphors give an edge to your poem.
Crandall Avatar
October 15, 2025 at 4:34 PM
Thanks, I appreciate your kind words!
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