An Observation

On wooden bench and fresh mulch Rattles the keys of life By freckled mammals Grazing asphalt pastures Aimlessly… missing The rumble of ocean pastel backdrops Voice of winds Caressing ears and cheek alike Golden heat rays pour Reflective images of stars Whilst blades of yellow Brown or green Stand still And nature sways Lay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Breidenthal Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:11 PM
What a beautiful scene. The imagery I got gave me a sense of peace and happiness. It's amazing what can happen just by sitting at a bench for a time. Well, whatever inspired you, this is very nicely written. :) Always, Laura
Andresen Avatar
March 17, 2012 at 5:48 PM
Well done, I like it. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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March 17, 2012 at 8:40 AM
So nicely done.. fresh and warm feelings... always a chair at Poetic Table for you hun.... hugs to you.. Michael
Dietrich Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 9:47 PM
I agree with Marlon down here, so gracefully said. Beautiful imagery.
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