Mystic Rose Rose Poet Rhyme

An Observation

Silk and light double glades of beauty on a wire of thin 
I cannot help but wonder how long it took him to spin 
this singular string of intricate structure, this web 

Early morning sips , the air brushes my rousing cheek
as the sun yawns out I observe softly, but do not speak 
this natural fibre of ancient wisdom still hasn't ebbed  

its incandescent firey blaze is a mirage a shaft of light 
the remnant of a spider still attached from yester night 
this arachnid wanderer of dawn by morning's celeb,  

has captured my imagination and my inquisitive mind
this creature of weave has me, vaguely entwined...

Sponsor	Mark Toney
Contest Name	2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 4 | Enter Contest
Deadline	7/20/2022 12:00:00 AM

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Valsa George June 26, 2022 at 9:52 AM Lovely penning, dear Rose! The imagery you have woven is more intricate and skilfull than the spider's web.A really deserving win, friend! Congratulations !

Paula Goldsmith June 26, 2022 at 8:06 AM Congratulations on your win. A "Creative" write. Have a great/blessed day ......................

John Watt June 25, 2022 at 10:37 PM Delightfully creative and original! Congrats on your high placement, Rose.

Unseeking Seeker June 25, 2022 at 7:48 PM Superb artistry, the way you describe this, MRR! Congrats on your win!

Mark Toney June 25, 2022 at 4:31 PM Rose, your detailed "Observation" of a "creature of weave" and his handiwork is amazing, and you have "captured my imagination." Congratulations on your second-place, podium finish on Mile 4 of my 2022 Poetry Marathon Contest. Mile 5 has already started!

Rico Leffanta June 19, 2022 at 7:02 PM The Black Widow's web is noted for its strength, but they are a bit touchy about our using it! Enjoyed! Aloha!

Robert Gorelick June 19, 2022 at 6:00 PM Spiders create such intricate, splendid designs, doing natures brilliant handiwork. You've captured how blessed we are by all God's creatures--great and small. Robert

Timothy Ray June 19, 2022 at 5:43 PM breathtaking...a delicious walk in the wonder of it...a simple web becomes a meandering of visual beauty, still lost in the mystery of this....deftly executed, take a gracious bow, my lady, the audience is quiet because they still are in awe

Eve Roper June 19, 2022 at 4:48 PM I like your observation of the web being created by its artist . Nicely done Blessings my friend, and wish Aldo happy Father’s Day

Gordon Mcconnell June 19, 2022 at 1:18 PM Nice one Rose, really good rhyme and flow too. A joy to read, blessings, Gordon

Victor Buhagiar June 19, 2022 at 10:26 AM The world is made up of wonderful sights. Great rhyme.

Susan Ashley June 19, 2022 at 9:23 AM Dear Rose, how wonderful that "this creature of weave" (love this!) has captured your amazement in his silky spin. I appreciate your beautiful observation of a truly exquisite natural structure. I am amazed by the intricate beauty of spider webs too, especially when the silken threads shine with iridescence in the sun. Such a splendid poem! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Vijay Pandit June 19, 2022 at 4:14 AM They are among natural wonders. A poem well spun Vienna.

Valsa George June 19, 2022 at 12:14 AM I too am intrigued and fascinated each time, when I see a spider's web ! This gossamer fabric is spun with great artistry. The intricate structure leaves us in awe ! Beautifully composed, dear Rose.