An Obligatory Liaison

I once lived and thrived in quiet meadows
Amongst a sea of buttercups and pansies 
Protected by mountains of wisdom
I drank deep from crystal clear springs
That flowed for generations making rounded stones
That ranged in shades jet black to pearly white
From dawn to dusk I roamed carefree

I learned virtues, tolerance, and spirituality 
I learned there was nothing, no one, better than I
I learned integrity, honesty and unconditional love
Felt invincible, imbued with abundance of self-confidence
I walked with grace in natural beauty and strength
Full of enriching dreams for the future
But the virtue of patience was never mine

In hind sight, the lack of this virtue 
Would adversely affect my life forever
Good advice was tossed to the wind
A dreamer always hurrying to get some place
Away from the meadows, away from the mountains
To be free! To run free! As far as the wind would carry 
An open book I was and quite an easy one to read

I seized my freedom and escaped the green meadows
To an enchanting forest I came
There I met this handsome, charming stranger 
With a seemingly incredible love for me
Weary I was, yet, “this could be my prince!” I thought
So onward into my future I ran
He wined me and dined me and
For awhile I was his queen

A beautiful replica of ourselves we share
A gem that's simply irreplaceable
Unsuspecting I was throughout the years
Never a suspicion, worry or care
‘Til the day the Instant message appeared
And there it was in black and white
A blast of reality in full view!
My heart broken in pieces lay, my self-esteem in tow

The man I had trusted and given my all
Had betrayed the love we shared
As I look back to earlier days, blameless I am not
In my haste to leave my green meadows
I contracted an “obligatory liaison”
For a Marriage it has never been
Gone is the sparkle of my beautiful eyes
The wasted years of living lies
I'm done I'm gone!

An Entry for Adelana's "Betrayal" Contest.
01/24/10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/27/2010 3:45:00 PM
Congratulations Audrey on your win in the Betrayal contest. A well written rendering of a universal dilemma.
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Date: 2/26/2010 3:22:00 PM
Dear Audrey , just now seeing you won high with this one.Enjoy this moment. This was a great poem. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 2/26/2010 7:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Starflixer's Betrayal contest Audrey. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/25/2010 5:27:00 PM
A poem well worthy of a win in this contest of betrayal. congratulations Audrey. good work...Margaret
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:09:00 PM
Congrats Audrey on your 2nd place win in the Betrayal contest.. a beautiful write and a well deserved win.. enjoy this victory.. luv.. your friend..Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/25/2010 12:07:00 PM
This is an excellent poem, Audrey. If this is based on your own experience, I'm glad you moved on and hope you have found someone more worthy. Congratulations on your win! Enjoy your success. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/10/2010 4:16:00 AM
This one is strong and well written. It is an a delight to read even though it ended sadly because it tugs on the emotions and memories that all too often ingrain themselves in memories of love betrayed. Very nice poetry. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/31/2010 2:14:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this with me..it is very deep and touching. Feeling your pain as I read down the page. I couldn't wait to see where it was going to lead....nice work.
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Date: 1/29/2010 9:12:00 AM
Let me see if i got this straight. You got married , you didnt satisfy his sexual needs or communicate his sexuality, he cheated, then you revenge screwed another guy, and then you found truth. Why does love hinge on sexual ownership? Please dont hate me, I am just annoying you, to evoke a really truthful response to a question i do not understand about women. The poem was great though....
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Date: 1/27/2010 8:56:00 AM
Beautifully penned and soul stirring with sadness...well done Audrey...TAH
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Date: 1/26/2010 5:50:00 PM
Dear Audrey, how very poignant, profound and honest tale of your life so far and you wrote that so beautifully. A winner in my book. Good luck on the contest. Thanks for sharing and thank you for your nice comments on mine today. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 1/26/2010 12:28:00 PM
This is a winner for sure Audrey...My tears flow along with yours...Marty
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Date: 1/26/2010 3:45:00 AM
Good write for this "Betrayal Contest" The words flow, interest is maintained throughout, and the ending "hurts" because of the betrayal. I hope this is not true... Excellent Poetry. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/25/2010 10:13:00 AM
It seems you climbed out of a solitary dark place my buddy! Great write and whoever broke your heart will meet Karma in the most pureset form.
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Date: 1/25/2010 9:06:00 AM
Just wanted to stop by and say good morning and hope you have a great day.
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:33:00 AM
Wow Audrey, sounds like we have had similar green fields. I Love the whole story it flows so gracefully and ends abruptly enough to explain the deepest betrayal and pain. I hope this is for the contest. It is truly a magnificent expression. Don't you just want to write a book!!! Thanks for your inspiring comments as well! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 1/25/2010 4:07:00 AM
Write filled with emotion from the early joy to the disappointment. Keep the creative pen flowing .Thanks for taking your time to stop by and comment on my work. Sara
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Date: 1/24/2010 10:29:00 PM
This is very powerful and heartfelt, and you really poured youself into it. I really like this, Audrey. it's in the betrayal contest,isn't it? Thanks for reading my poems today. Andrea
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Date: 1/24/2010 10:15:00 PM
I have been betrayed also and your manner of expression is very good. Forgive me because I dare not presume to give advise but for me I managed to turn my betrayal into a learning tool; I hope the same for you if that's not too personal.
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Date: 1/24/2010 9:38:00 PM
Excellent write Audrey.. I hope u entered this one in the Betrayal contest posted.. it is perfect... thankxxx for your wonderful comments about my poetry tonight.. I just posted one about my date from jury duty when u have time to read... this one is so great... enjoyed... luv... Linda-Marie..
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