An Obituary

Once here was a river 
A laughing river 
A caring river 
She cooled our throats 
She poured Gold 
Into our paddy fields 
She was a playground for our kids 
But we cut her vein 
We cut her throat 
We stabbed into her heart 
She can cry only now 
Forget to laugh 
But I still remember her lullaby 
Perhaps it is an obituary 
To my beloved river
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 3, 2012 at 8:45 AM
I understand this so well my dear JK this is humanities legacy wroldwide i think.. not many rivers remain unscathed now...but your appreciation of your beloved river is so natural... thanks for sharing my dear friend and im so glad your here ... karen
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June 3, 2012 at 9:36 AM
thank you dear poetess .i think you are my friend "sunhat'' at writers network and karen at poemhunter.com .i think i am right .sorry if i am wrong .i do not know much about this site .if you are my friend sunhat and karen mail me [email protected] .i miss you my friend .if you are another person forgive me .i have been searching for my friend karen at every writing sites .jk
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