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For 2025 Poetry Marathon Mile 19 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney

An Invitation to Reminisce

Old friend, won’t you join me late tonight?
We can watch by dimming candlelight,
A play with young characters in motion, 
To their ideals and passions, such devotion.

Their lives filled with great meaning and import,
While not thinking too much that life is short,
We can watch as they love, fight, and make up.
One day it will be gone when they wake up.

We can sigh and cry and laugh till it’s late,
Though, to these characters, we can’t quite relate.
While the dramatic players on stage are us,
Their concerns tonight seem meaningless.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Godwin Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 10:19 AM
As a writer, I should do better than WOW, but that's where I am at the moment. I've only read this poem of yours, yet I know you were born a writer. Your ending is dramatic and beautifully crafted. You wove this in a way I admire. Now, I must talk about your picture. Your smile is a smile I've admired on others, open and warm as though joy still ruled over pain, and as if you've never meet anyone you weren't first friendly towards. I want a demeanor like that! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Crandall Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 11:36 AM
Wow is the word - this is pretty much the nicest comment I've received, CayCay. It makes me like my own poem more - one of my better ones I think, so, if you read others, it could be downhill from here - lol! I try to start friendly and stay friendly. I guess it's the interplay of joy and pain that we write about, hoping that joy wins out :-)
Gifford Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 8:00 AM
Beautifully written, David.
Crandall Avatar
August 16, 2024 at 4:00 PM
Thanks Zyrool!
La France Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 6:47 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, Constance
Crandall Avatar
April 22, 2024 at 9:45 AM
Thanks so much Constance!
Agustin Avatar
March 27, 2024 at 7:03 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Crandall Avatar
April 1, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you Beata!
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