An Invitation to Reminisce

Old friend, won’t you join me late tonight?
We can watch by dimming candlelight,
A play with young characters in motion, 
To their ideals and passions, such devotion.

Their lives filled with great meaning and import,
While not thinking too much that life is short,
We can watch as they love, fight, and make up.
One day it will be gone when they wake up.

We can sigh and cry and laugh till it’s late,
Though, to these characters, we can’t quite relate.
While the dramatic players on stage are us,
Their concerns tonight seem meaningless.
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Date: 3/14/2025 10:19:00 AM
As a writer, I should do better than WOW, but that's where I am at the moment. I've only read this poem of yours, yet I know you were born a writer. Your ending is dramatic and beautifully crafted. You wove this in a way I admire. Now, I must talk about your picture. Your smile is a smile I've admired on others, open and warm as though joy still ruled over pain, and as if you've never meet anyone you weren't first friendly towards. I want a demeanor like that! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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David Crandall
Date: 3/14/2025 11:36:00 AM
Wow is the word - this is pretty much the nicest comment I've received, CayCay. It makes me like my own poem more - one of my better ones I think, so, if you read others, it could be downhill from here - lol! I try to start friendly and stay friendly. I guess it's the interplay of joy and pain that we write about, hoping that joy wins out :-)
Date: 8/16/2024 8:00:00 AM
Beautifully written, David.
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David Crandall
Date: 8/16/2024 4:00:00 PM
Thanks Zyrool!
Date: 4/22/2024 6:47:00 AM
David, congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely poem, Constance
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David Crandall
Date: 4/22/2024 9:45:00 AM
Thanks so much Constance!
Date: 3/27/2024 7:03:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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David Crandall
Date: 4/1/2024 5:37:00 PM
Thank you Beata!
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