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An Invitation For Love

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I knew I loved her from the start, She was in love with another Who treated her like a brother! Annoyed, she then noticed my heart. Asked her to dinner as a start. My first quitilla attempt. My apologies if it is not true to form.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/19/2023 4:00:00 AM

Just back to check this one out. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/26/2021 6:30:00 AM

Those we might night notice “at first sight,” could be the love of our life.

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 7/26/2021 2:29:00 AM

Bravo, for venturing into new poetic forms Victor....Delice

Joanna Daniel

Date: 7/25/2021 10:27:00 PM

Not sure about the form, Victor, but great content, an invitation to dinner is the best start:)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 7/25/2021 9:30:00 PM

Perfecto! I like the Quintilla form too, 8 syllables per line x 5 lines. Short & crisp, whilst rhyming too

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/25/2021 11:17:00 PM

It should have iambic Tetrameter and that I always fail to achieve.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/25/2021 6:59:00 AM

I haven't heard of this form. I will have to look it up. It is good to attempt a new form sometimes to give the mind something new to think about. It seems fine to me but of course I don't know. I am glad you attempted it anyway. Thanks for the visit to my page. I wonder if you are talking about your relationship with the form or the person. LOL..Sara

Victor Buhagiar
Date: 7/25/2021 7:12:00 AM

It is of course a love poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/25/2021 5:20:00 AM

- A lovely start to getting to know each other better, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilene Evans

Date: 7/25/2021 12:25:00 AM

Anything romantic is sweet and lovely. Beautifully penned.

Eve Roper

Date: 7/24/2021 9:20:00 PM

Lovely poem, with an invitation for dinner. I've only written one and it was called "Crowned May Queen" written on 4/18/2015.

Sotto Poet

Date: 7/24/2021 4:19:00 PM

It looks like this form is special for love invitations, your words are perfectly used and placed, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful quintilla // best regards dear Victor

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 7/24/2021 1:22:00 PM

Your Quintilla is perfect Victor, love the content… Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/24/2021 10:29:00 AM

Your lovely poem and picture are perfectly matched, Victor. I enjoyed reading this new form, which is new to me. Now I've got to try it. Best wishes. :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2021 9:14:00 AM

I do not know if I am very familiar with the form, but it sure seems great to ME how you did it.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/24/2021 5:45:00 AM

An invitation to love has its charm--so does your poem, Victor. Enjoyed the tenor of your write.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 7/24/2021 1:49:00 AM

Let's hope it was the start of a lovely romance, wine and dine is a great way to begin. Not heard of that form Victor. Tom