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An Invitation For Love

I knew I loved her from the start,
She was in love with another
Who treated her like a brother!
Annoyed, she then noticed my heart.
Asked her to dinner as a start.


My first quitilla attempt.  
My apologies if it is not true to form.

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Sara Kendrick

February 19, 2023 at 4:00 AM

Just back to check this one out. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

July 26, 2021 at 6:30 AM

Those we might night notice “at first sight,” could be the love of our life.

Delice Arleen Skelly

July 26, 2021 at 2:29 AM

Bravo, for venturing into new poetic forms Victor....Delice

Joanna Daniel

July 25, 2021 at 10:27 PM

Not sure about the form, Victor, but great content, an invitation to dinner is the best start:)

Unseeking Seeker

July 25, 2021 at 9:30 PM

Perfecto! I like the Quintilla form too, 8 syllables per line x 5 lines. Short & crisp, whilst rhyming too

Victor Buhagiar

July 25, 2021 at 11:17 PM

It should have iambic Tetrameter and that I always fail to achieve.

Sara Kendrick

July 25, 2021 at 6:59 AM

I haven't heard of this form. I will have to look it up. It is good to attempt a new form sometimes to give the mind something new to think about. It seems fine to me but of course I don't know. I am glad you attempted it anyway. Thanks for the visit to my page. I wonder if you are talking about your relationship with the form or the person. LOL..Sara

Victor Buhagiar

July 25, 2021 at 7:12 AM

It is of course a love poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 25, 2021 at 5:20 AM

- A lovely start to getting to know each other better, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilene Evans

July 25, 2021 at 12:25 AM

Anything romantic is sweet and lovely. Beautifully penned.

Eve Roper

July 24, 2021 at 9:20 PM

Lovely poem, with an invitation for dinner. I've only written one and it was called "Crowned May Queen" written on 4/18/2015.

Sotto Poet

July 24, 2021 at 4:19 PM

It looks like this form is special for love invitations, your words are perfectly used and placed, I really enjoyed reading this wonderful quintilla // best regards dear Victor

Beryl Edmonds

July 24, 2021 at 1:22 PM

Your Quintilla is perfect Victor, love the content… Belle

Evelyn Judy Buehler

July 24, 2021 at 10:29 AM

Your lovely poem and picture are perfectly matched, Victor. I enjoyed reading this new form, which is new to me. Now I've got to try it. Best wishes. :D