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An interview with a grain of sand

quote:  " Life is Dry as a desert, lest you find the oasis of love" .. Tanu Vermani

In timeless talk, with a grain of sand I sat,
From beaches wide to river's flat.

Voiceless, yet with tales profound,
Ages old, and wars unbound.

Through time's vast expanse it flew,
With camel caravans it grew.

Desert battles, blood-stained land,
Sands bear witness, silent stand.

On beaches, joy and love they share,
Sand castles rise, dreams declare.

Sculptures formed, by hands that craft,
In shifting dunes, a moonlit draft.

Amongst it all, a whispered plea,
Unity brings salvation, see.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Goldsmith Avatar
April 29, 2024 at 8:45 AM
Back with congratulations. I enjoyed reading this creative write again. Have a great day with your win...................
George Avatar
March 21, 2024 at 9:20 PM
You come up with lofty thoughts and rhyme them in the most beautiful way. I enjoy your poems, dear Jay. You are indeed very gifted. All the Best in the contest....
Goldsmith Avatar
March 20, 2024 at 11:58 AM
What a creative write with a fun picture. Great quote... "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one.  Have a fun day playing in the sand..................
Rodgers Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 7:51 PM
Hello Jay, You beautifully capture the essence of life's journey through the metaphor of a grain of sand. Your words create a picture of the timeless wisdom held within the smallest of particles. From desolate deserts to bustling beaches, the grain of sand witnesses the spectrum of human experiences. I love how your words convey a message of unity and love amidst the vastness of existence, reminding us to seek peace in connections that transcend time and space. Truly, a reflection of profound insight and empathy. - Blessings, Daniel
Dietrich Avatar
March 19, 2024 at 1:11 PM
A beautiful way to focus on the topic, Jay. Well done
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