'an Interloper's Story'

pristine tutus and music as their accompaniment animated faces depicting an interloper’s story six ballerinas tiptoe across the floor in unison
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Falotico Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 3:09 PM
I love this!!!!! your talent is as endless as your beauty and friendship... love Michael
Fraser Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 7:46 AM
Good luck in the contest with this gem Wilma....:)
Sweetheart Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 5:44 AM
A pristine entry for the contest Wilma.. good luck my friend.. luv the animated faces line.. awesome as always.. hope u enjoy my baby photo on my bio posted yesterday.. so fun going through old memories luv..happy weekend...
Smith Avatar
April 1, 2011 at 4:38 AM
Ohh I really like this:) enjoyed, looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn
Mehta Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 2:01 PM
What a perspective, what a way to read the picture of the contest, Wilma.
Dietrich Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 1:50 PM
Hey, in a way, it's kind of like mine. they were interlopers in my room. heehee. I like how you saw them as interlopers in this cute sijo.
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March 31, 2011 at 11:47 AM
You had me smiling as I read this, Wilma. I remember wearing those tutus as a little girl, but I didn't exactly "tiptoe" daintily across the floor. Great take on the picture, dear. Wishing you success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn
Aul Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 11:42 AM
A great picture painted.....George
Foulk Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 8:44 AM
very good piece of poetry
Peranteau Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 8:18 AM
I like this Sijo Wilma...love it when I feel the mood of the write dear poet ! Have a great day ! Much love, james
Tacito Avatar
March 31, 2011 at 6:30 AM
The verbiage use here is incredible. Quite the journey here...
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