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'an Interloper's Story'

pristine tutus and music as their accompaniment animated faces depicting an interloper’s story six ballerinas tiptoe across the floor in unison

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Michael J. Falotico

Date: 4/1/2011 3:09:00 PM

I love this!!!!! your talent is as endless as your beauty and friendship... love Michael

James Fraser

Date: 4/1/2011 7:46:00 AM

Good luck in the contest with this gem Wilma....:)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/1/2011 5:44:00 AM

A pristine entry for the contest Wilma.. good luck my friend.. luv the animated faces line.. awesome as always.. hope u enjoy my baby photo on my bio posted yesterday.. so fun going through old memories luv..happy weekend...

Dana Smith

Date: 4/1/2011 4:38:00 AM

Ohh I really like this:) enjoyed, looking forward to reading more. Take care. Dana'lynn

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/31/2011 2:01:00 PM

What a perspective, what a way to read the picture of the contest, Wilma.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/31/2011 1:50:00 PM

Hey, in a way, it's kind of like mine. they were interlopers in my room. heehee. I like how you saw them as interlopers in this cute sijo.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/31/2011 11:47:00 AM

You had me smiling as I read this, Wilma. I remember wearing those tutus as a little girl, but I didn't exactly "tiptoe" daintily across the floor. Great take on the picture, dear. Wishing you success in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn