Mohan Chutani Poet Rhyme

An Innocent Childhood Memory 3

kites my fascination
most of my holiday time honed flying talents
sensation!

the thread spool
and kites lay hidden from parents
so cool!

free mind
perseverance
shined!

kites my fascination
and kites lay hidden from parents
shined!

10.8.2020
Another example of MINICHU form
to encourage Soupers to attempt and participate in the contest as it is not that difficult a form.

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Valsa George February 1, 2022 at 9:34 PM Kite is always a fascination for children. I can relate to your experience.... Beautifully written . Glad I could visit your page.

Anisha Dutta August 17, 2020 at 5:37 AM Kite was also my fascination. Thrills and excitement. 'll try the contest. Best Wishes Mohan Chutani August 17, 2020 at 5:51 PM Best Wishes Anisha

V. Deepa August 11, 2020 at 7:02 AM I already attempted long back Mohan Sir.. But not as best as yours.:-P I enjoyed flying kites with my brother even during this lockdown.It was fun.:-) Childhood memories are unforgettable too..!!:-) Your taking a great effort by providing examples to us.Don't worry you'll get good entries very soon from our talented members here.:-) Hope your doing well.Take care.Warm regards:-) Mohan Chutani August 17, 2020 at 5:51 PM Thanx Deepa

Joanna Daniel August 11, 2020 at 1:38 AM Kites were a must during childhood and make a good pastime in this lockdown too:) nice form, Mohan:) Mohan Chutani August 11, 2020 at 3:32 AM Thanks Jo. Hope to see you attempting this one for my contest. Best. Mohan