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An Innocent Childhood Memory 3

kites my fascination
most of my holiday time honed flying talents
sensation!

the thread spool
and kites lay hidden from parents
so cool!

free mind
perseverance
shined!

kites my fascination
and kites lay hidden from parents
shined!

10.8.2020
Another example of MINICHU form
to encourage Soupers to attempt and participate in the contest as it is not that difficult a form.

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Valsa George Date: 2/1/2022 9:34:00 PM Kite is always a fascination for children. I can relate to your experience.... Beautifully written . Glad I could visit your page. Login to Reply

Anisha Dutta Date: 8/17/2020 5:37:00 AM Kite was also my fascination. Thrills and excitement. 'll try the contest. Best Wishes Login to Reply Mohan Chutani Date: 8/17/2020 5:51:00 PM Best Wishes Anisha

V. Deepa Date: 8/11/2020 7:02:00 AM I already attempted long back Mohan Sir.. But not as best as yours.:-P I enjoyed flying kites with my brother even during this lockdown.It was fun.:-) Childhood memories are unforgettable too..!!:-) Your taking a great effort by providing examples to us.Don't worry you'll get good entries very soon from our talented members here.:-) Hope your doing well.Take care.Warm regards:-) Login to Reply Mohan Chutani Date: 8/17/2020 5:51:00 PM Thanx Deepa

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/11/2020 1:38:00 AM Kites were a must during childhood and make a good pastime in this lockdown too:) nice form, Mohan:) Login to Reply Mohan Chutani Date: 8/11/2020 3:32:00 AM Thanks Jo. Hope to see you attempting this one for my contest. Best. Mohan