An Innocent Child

On a bench under a shade tree,
A woman sat who could not see.
Beside her a man who could not speak.
A young girl came who appeared meek.
She softly asked the man, “Am I pretty?”
He pointed to the woman without sight.
The girl said, “I want to be polite, but how can she be right?
What answer can I find?  You can see, the beautiful woman is blind.”
She asked the woman, “Can you tell me if I was unkind?”
Her reply, “Go ask the man and have him tell you.”
The child was confused and did not know what to do.
She thought if he cannot talk, how can he reply?
Then sat next the two and did not know why.
She sat peacefully there, then said with a plesant smile,
“I would like to sit by you two for a while.”
The woman spoke, “I think you are a pretty child,
You are so caring and your manner seems mild.”
The man shook his head to say, that he too felt the same way.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Sietesantos Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 10:56 AM
Hi Barbara, please accept my congratulations on your well-deserved win! What a heartwarming tale with an excellent lesson behind it! I enjoyed reading this piece and it gets a big fat 7! Pandita"
Campbell Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 12:11 PM
Pandita, Praise from someone with your talents is truly valued. My happy expectation is that we may have the opportunity to interact in the future. TX BC
A. Sharma Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 10:24 PM
Congrats Barbara for a deserved big win with this very thoughtful write!
Campbell Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 11:58 PM
Thanks again for your positive apprciated words. Barbara
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September 2, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Barbara, Congratulations on your win.-----SKAT
Campbell Avatar
September 3, 2015 at 12:08 AM
Skat, Thanks so much. Barbara
Allison Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 3:45 PM
a lovely take on the theme congrats on your win Barbara:-) hugs Jan xx
Campbell Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 4:01 PM
Thanks so much. Barbara
Campbell Avatar
September 2, 2015 at 3:52 PM
Your decision to place my poems as a winner, means so much to me. Thank you, Barbara
Robertson Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 4:00 PM
A Beautiful and Wise Poem.
Campbell Avatar
September 1, 2015 at 4:38 PM
Thank you for letting me know that you liked the poem. It is always nice to receive positive support. Barbara
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