An Incomplete Wish

I remember when you first 
waved to me,
I remember when you first 
asked me out on a date,
I remember when you first 
called me beautiful,
I remember when you first said 
"i love you" to me,
I remember how i trembled 
when you first touched my lips,
I remember when you 
promised me that you will 
never leave me,
I remember when you said-
"you and me forever and ever".

Now i sit all alone,waiting for 
you,
Thinking about all the promises 
you made,
Where have you gone love?
I miss you more and more with 
each passing breath,
Not a day passes without me 
thinking about you,
I crave for you touch,your 
smile,your kiss and your 
intoxicating voice.
I wish for the old times again,
I wish you had never left my 
side,
I wish i could grow old with you
I wish i could die lying in your 
arms,

Alas! I fear my wish will only 
remain a wish.

I wish......

#brokenheart lover.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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A   Avatar
February 20, 2016 at 9:07 AM
nice to see this one again
Garg Avatar
January 17, 2016 at 5:40 AM
Beautifully expressed but this made me sad.....
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 1:18 PM
Hi, Sahiba, this is a deep read. love it. SKAT
A   Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 9:11 AM
Hi Sahiba. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully you find this place to be the comfort zone your writing pen is looking for. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Stop by anytime you like. I’m looking forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy this community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend Linda
Shines Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 8:10 AM
Welcome to poetry-Soup!and nice write.
Swaminathan Avatar
May 28, 2013 at 3:42 AM
wonderful write keep penning such painful moments, some shall wash out their hearts reading them and you shall feel lighter after dairying your poem
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May 28, 2013 at 2:33 AM
Sahiba, a enjoyable poem to read. - Welcome to P-Soup-Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your poems here with us. - Have fun with poetry! - Welcome to read some of my poems. - Have a nice week. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Konos Avatar
May 27, 2013 at 4:52 PM
Excellent poetry....thanks for posting...now let's have more....
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May 27, 2013 at 12:04 PM
Love this Sahiba! Keep up?
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