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An Incomplete Love Story No More

“…I have loved thee with an everlasting love: therefore with lovingkindness have I drawn thee.”* With such compassion-filled assertion, the Supreme Lover assured me His unconditional love along His grace, mercy, forgiveness and peace despite of who I was: tenaciously stubborn and self-willed midst my human nature’s vanities, flaws, imperfections even though by divine perspective, I was utterly worthless. “How unfathomable” was my reaction Marked by vehement refusal... …Making the story incomplete. “…I have loved thee with an everlasting love: therefore with lovingkindness have I drawn thee.” Again, such truth reverberated---reaching my heart Expressed by the sovereign Source and Author of love With His goodness, provisions and wisdom Subduing my self-righteousness, arrogance, loftiness Vanquishing my skepticism, doubts, apprehensions Conquering my sinfulness, guilt, shame… “How sacrificing” was my response... Moved by faith He has granted, I trusted Him – my Savior… ...Making the love story complete!
*Jeremiah 31:3 The LORD hath appeared of old unto me, saying, Yea, I have loved thee with an everlasting love: therefore with lovingkindness have I drawn thee. July 20, 2018 1st place, "Standard Contest No. 105" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 7/28/2018.

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Date: 7/31/2018 3:12:00 PM
Lovely. Congrats on your fine top win, Beata.
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Date: 7/28/2018 7:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Well done!
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Date: 7/28/2018 6:10:00 PM
Beautiful imagery of love, Beata, congratulations on your win.. . Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/21/2018 2:13:00 AM
Beata.. I'll share a similar story soon. In my darkest moment I found him. Come see me!
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Beata Agustin
Date: 7/21/2018 5:47:00 AM
Praise God. He alone can make our love story complete. Thanks.

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