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An Incomplete Love Story

Lullabies give birth to a new sunrise, and the wind lies still in the valleys low… Sapphire skies sunken in static eyes, the birch trees bark a belting blow… Where echoes dance in sweet romance, and love is whispered before the rainbow… Transfixed in trance a gadded glance, where hungry hearts begin to borrow… For my love stands still near the daffodil, where the meritable meadows grow… Your love has lost its will a splatted spill, and now my heart is full of sorrow… My shallow screams in singing streams, as time washes away the wounds of woe… I’ve lost my dreams where beauty beams, where the wind lies still in the valleys low. July.12.2018 An incomplete love story Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal ,

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/27/2018 8:03:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry

Date: 7/27/2018 4:39:00 PM

So beautiful. Congratulations on your win. Sad. Enjoyed.

Ryan Hughes

Date: 7/26/2018 9:28:00 PM

Hmmm...very soothing to me in an od'd way...the sweet dark witching hour nostalgia Your flow came upon me and slowly I found myself immersed.

Sandra Haight

Date: 7/25/2018 7:16:00 PM

A very sad but beautiful poem, ^WW^, that speaks of lost love. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Sandra

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 7/24/2018 1:09:00 PM

Ahh such a beautiful and sad poem this is, truly a joy to read, especially the imagery you have put in it, many congratulations on your 2nd position in the contest, good luck and have a really nice day

John Gondolf

Date: 7/23/2018 3:10:00 PM

A beautifully sad poem of lost love, WW, nicely penned. Best of luck. John

Becca Teagan

Date: 7/20/2018 11:46:00 PM

This is really amazing. Hauntingly beautiful.

Charles Messina

Date: 7/14/2018 8:51:00 AM

Awesome, WW A wonderful write my friend. Best of luck in the contest...Charlie

Lyric Man

Date: 7/13/2018 4:40:00 PM

This is a magical write that brings all the important elements together to sing of unfulfilled love.. so Awesome!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/13/2018 4:27:00 PM

mellow is the word, WW... i like the flow and alliteration which adds more beauty to this poem... huggs

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/13/2018 7:35:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your poem. There is something about the internal rhyme, it's like discovering a small hidden unexpected treat.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/13/2018 6:30:00 AM

- "Your love has lost its will a splatted game, and now my heart is full of sorrow ... "... sounds both beautiful and sad, W.W. - A beautiful poem ... "The Ghost" on the meadow .... it's the soul that walks ? - >(funny :))) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pashang Salehi

Date: 7/13/2018 1:34:00 AM

I don't think your story is incomplete. It's very much full of colors and beauties.

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/12/2018 11:37:00 PM

Splendid poem, WW. Almost too pretty to be sad. Good luck my friend:)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/12/2018 10:54:00 PM

This is just wonderful WW. It contains everything I look for in a great poem. I am putting it into my Faves! I hope to see it on top. : )