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An Incomplete Love Story

I know sadness it comes each day without my consent and holds me before its easel where it paints tears streaming down my face beneath fading moons and portraits of yesterdays that hang in the dim lit gallery of my soul where no one comes but the ghostly shadow of you For love were you and I on the canvas of time with warm breezes and light footsteps we kissed among the fragrant flowers that wrapped around our hearts with glorious scents we danced in twilight during setting suns and held hands in the rush of tide where are feet submerged we made love in soft splayed light in meadows where streams rippled in the distance and birds sang on the farthest hills but, hate took you away and left misty eyes and outstretched arms and an unmeasurable space between for I am a common man unknown to the glittering culture of glowing jewels and flowing dresses that surrounds your life with its cupped hands the words "your not worthy" echo still in my head when your father pulled you away without remorse to leave me bleeding on the sword of my desire that he thrust through our hearts with his old cold merciless rigid statement of classes one day, I will find you again until then I'll know sadness... 7/11/18 contest An Incomplete Love Story

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Date: 7/27/2018 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading this well written poem. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/27/2018 4:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. So poetically beautiful and well-written, tender and so, so sad. Well done!
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Date: 7/24/2018 1:08:00 PM
Your poem is really deep and beautiful,it is really sad that people now a days only see others on the basic of their job and status, if a guy is rich, he is worthy but if the same guy is poor, he doesn't have any right to love, I really enjoyed reading this masterpiece of yours, many congratulations on your wonderful second position, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 7/15/2018 6:03:00 PM
wow, you NAILED this challenge. I hope I can come up with something even half this good!!
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Date: 7/11/2018 3:38:00 PM
Wow Frederic. This is such a well written piece that really reached me deeply. Stunningly written. Well done :)
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