David Kavanagh Poet Rhyme

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An Impartial Day

An impartial day 


       Upon lush yonder valleys, 
          golden sun rays glow
       Reflected raindrops prism, 
       forming a partial rainbow
           Just above my head, 
       darkness stubbornly grows 
       Interrupting one of natures,
          iridescent idyllic shows 

          I follow blind trajectory
         towards riverbeds below
        To find a multicolored haze,
         surrounding the meadow
       Fleeting glimpse of oneness, 
          albeit broken as it goes 
        Perfection alone is nothing,
           fulfillment makes it so. 


By
David Kavanagh

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Caren Krutsinger January 20, 2021 at 4:59 AM I love the lightness of this. Perfection stops a lot of rainbows from coming into their full light. David Kavanagh January 20, 2021 at 11:19 AM I love searching for the other side of the rainbow ?? sometimes it’s not where you imagine it to be, if you do manage to find it at all, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty January 17, 2021 at 9:22 AM David Impartiality succinctly idyllic Fleeting glimpses of oneness Infinite light Christopher Flaherty January 17, 2021 at 12:35 PM Nice work this fella very good David Kavanagh January 17, 2021 at 9:51 AM Yes Christopher it means nothing unless we give it meaning, perfection the ultimate illusion cheers David