An Impartial Day

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An impartial day Upon lush yonder valleys, golden sun rays glow Reflected raindrops prism, forming a partial rainbow Just above my head, darkness stubbornly grows Interrupting one of natures, iridescent idyllic shows I follow blind trajectory towards riverbeds below To find a multicolored haze, surrounding the meadow Fleeting glimpse of oneness, albeit broken as it goes Perfection alone is nothing, fulfillment makes it so. By David Kavanagh

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 1/20/2021 4:59:00 AM

I love the lightness of this. Perfection stops a lot of rainbows from coming into their full light.

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/20/2021 11:19:00 AM

I love searching for the other side of the rainbow ?? sometimes it’s not where you imagine it to be, if you do manage to find it at all, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 1/17/2021 9:22:00 AM

David Impartiality succinctly idyllic Fleeting glimpses of oneness Infinite light

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 1/17/2021 12:35:00 PM

Nice work this fella very good

David Kavanagh
Date: 1/17/2021 9:51:00 AM

Yes Christopher it means nothing unless we give it meaning, perfection the ultimate illusion cheers David