Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Poet Rhyme

An Imagery of You

It’s like you’re
in a game of
love, a game I
can’t take part

I’d play the
role of Robin Hood
trying to steal
your heart

The game
you’re in it had
you trapped within 
its dungeon cell 

A barren
place, with
many guards
I rode into this hell

I aimed my
arrows at the
guards striking
them with force

Then grabbed you
in the nick of
time and rode off
on my horse

We rode
all night, made
our escape and
got back safe and
sound

A ceremony
then ensued
which brought
out all the town

At the coronation
happened what I
always dreamed

I became the
king of all the
land and You
became my queen

After all is
said and done
we’d sit side
by side

And rule 
forever King 
and Queen
together you 
and I

Written in Queens, New York -Circa 1994 (Revised in Texas 2012)

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Paul Callus October 8, 2016 at 3:28 PM Lovely and romantic...takes me back to the times of damsels and knights in shining armour! Imagery and imagination sure go hand in hand:) Regards // paul

Paloma P October 8, 2016 at 7:46 AM Good imagination, sounds like a fairy tale come true! I'll leave it at that. ;) Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper October 8, 2016 at 11:28 AM Very imaginative indeed....I was 16 when I wrote this LOL! thanks for reading and commenting on this old poem here way down at the bottom of the list :^D Visit again okay? MC

Erika Little May 22, 2015 at 8:17 PM I can picture this word for word. This is one of my favorites as well. I know who to call on if I need to be rescued lol. Nice work!! Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper May 25, 2015 at 2:03 PM Call me and I'll come running LOL! Thank you so much "Little" Lady, I really appreciate you reading and commenting on this oldie... MC

Christina Holmes October 11, 2013 at 8:50 PM Awwww...this is so sweet and romantic. How heroic you are...the imagary is so vivd also. Love it.

Richard Lamoureux August 2, 2013 at 7:03 AM Well done, you should enter this one in the medieval contest. Also a belated welcome to the soup. Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper August 3, 2013 at 4:21 PM I'll keep my eyes peeled for it and Thanks! I appreciate that! MC

Sean L Sanders July 28, 2013 at 3:42 PM Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper July 28, 2013 at 7:43 PM Wow Sean, thanks for checking out the poem and commenting! I'm very appreciative of your kind words. MC

Shadow Hamilton July 28, 2013 at 4:39 AM hi Marquis exceptional poem congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper July 28, 2013 at 10:20 AM Thanks, much appreciated! I'm honored by the feature and your comment! MC

Poet Destroyer A July 27, 2013 at 9:32 PM Hello Marquis, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper July 28, 2013 at 10:21 AM Linda, you're a doll! Thank you -so much love here...it's great!

Shadow Hamilton July 26, 2013 at 4:48 AM welcome to PS congrats on feature Shadow x smiles Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper July 26, 2013 at 7:15 AM Well thank you! Don't know what I did to deserve the feature, but I'm happy to have it and I hope you enjoyed reading the poem! Thanks again Shadow!!! MC

Skat A July 12, 2013 at 4:53 PM Hi Marquis, awe.. i love this you and I theme.. if only my man wore this crown , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"

Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2013 at 10:49 AM - Hi Marquis, a well written poem. - I like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)