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An Imagery of You

It’s like you’re in a game of love, a game I can’t take part I’d play the role of Robin Hood trying to steal your heart The game you’re in it had you trapped within its dungeon cell A barren place, with many guards I rode into this hell I aimed my arrows at the guards striking them with force Then grabbed you in the nick of time and rode off on my horse We rode all night, made our escape and got back safe and sound A ceremony then ensued which brought out all the town At the coronation happened what I always dreamed I became the king of all the land and You became my queen After all is said and done we’d sit side by side And rule forever King and Queen together you and I Written in Queens, New York -Circa 1994 (Revised in Texas 2012)

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Date: 10/8/2016 3:28:00 PM
Lovely and romantic...takes me back to the times of damsels and knights in shining armour! Imagery and imagination sure go hand in hand:) Regards // paul
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Date: 10/8/2016 7:46:00 AM
Good imagination, sounds like a fairy tale come true! I'll leave it at that. ;)
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 10/8/2016 11:28:00 AM
Very imaginative indeed....I was 16 when I wrote this LOL! thanks for reading and commenting on this old poem here way down at the bottom of the list :^D Visit again okay? MC
Date: 5/22/2015 8:17:00 PM
I can picture this word for word. This is one of my favorites as well. I know who to call on if I need to be rescued lol. Nice work!!
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 5/25/2015 2:03:00 PM
Call me and I'll come running LOL! Thank you so much "Little" Lady, I really appreciate you reading and commenting on this oldie... MC
Date: 10/11/2013 8:50:00 PM
Awwww...this is so sweet and romantic. How heroic you are...the imagary is so vivd also. Love it.
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Date: 8/2/2013 7:03:00 AM
Well done, you should enter this one in the medieval contest. Also a belated welcome to the soup.
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 8/3/2013 4:21:00 PM
I'll keep my eyes peeled for it and Thanks! I appreciate that! MC
Date: 7/28/2013 3:42:00 PM
Congratz on being featured I know why to excellent poetry
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/28/2013 7:43:00 PM
Wow Sean, thanks for checking out the poem and commenting! I'm very appreciative of your kind words. MC
Date: 7/28/2013 4:39:00 AM
hi Marquis exceptional poem congrats on being featured Shadow x smiles
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/28/2013 10:20:00 AM
Thanks, much appreciated! I'm honored by the feature and your comment! MC
Date: 7/27/2013 9:32:00 PM
Hello Marquis, Congratulations, on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Take care & Goodnight... -xox- *LINDA
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Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper
Date: 7/28/2013 10:21:00 AM
Linda, you're a doll! Thank you -so much love here...it's great!
Date: 7/26/2013 4:48:00 AM
welcome to PS congrats on feature Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/26/2013 7:15:00 AM
Well thank you! Don't know what I did to deserve the feature, but I'm happy to have it and I hope you enjoyed reading the poem! Thanks again Shadow!!! MC
Date: 7/12/2013 4:53:00 PM
Hi Marquis, awe.. i love this you and I theme.. if only my man wore this crown , your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 7/10/2013 10:49:00 AM
- Hi Marquis, a well written poem. - I like it a lot. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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