An Image

clearly looking through the fog i see it clearly i picture the image of me walking tall confident swaying my hips and licking my lips tempting myself to look forward Squarely my eyes become one with me slipping me the eye of approval checking my view enjoying the sight of might stomping out that ego... all feminine pure estrogen hmmm...looky looky looky here... :-)

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 1/15/2009 6:33:00 AM

You go girl! Ain't nothin' like supreme self-confidence to get you through the day!! Best wishes, Keith

Derrick Burton

Date: 1/13/2009 11:48:00 AM

man.... can amagine that, I had a jamaican girl friend years ago... any way enjoyed reading this poetry and enjoy your day. Dont forget to check out my funny poem, The chocolate chip conspiracy.

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/12/2009 5:56:00 PM

So creative! I've been reading some of your other poems, (after you commented on mine, which I appreciated so much :)) ...and I don't know how I've missed so many of your wonderful pieces. You have a gift, a way of writing that is unique...I will be looking more often for your name. I'm glad I found your poetry! ~ Carrie

Date: 1/8/2009 12:40:00 PM

Creative view. The informal style works well to convey your thoughts. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for taking time to comment on mine. Keep on writing! Karen

Christopher Higgins

Date: 12/16/2008 6:35:00 PM

Very good write. well described and the poem flowed so sweetly.