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An Illness Unseen

The world around so quick to judge They look but they don't see No inkling what goes on inside a mind in utter turmoil If only you could find that switch And turn it off for just a while And for a time your mind be still Quietening demons who never sleep Inside your head they do not cease With vivid dreams and nightmares Playing deep inside your mind For not until the day you die Such peace and calm you'll reap And as your soul begins to soar As slowly As gently you open up your eyes No one there to judge you now Demons gone forever Love surrounds like a comforting shawl In a beautiful place where I pray you are now So calm So serene Suffering no more from an illness unseen~~~ Written 16th October 2021 so little understood about mental illness ~ an illness unseen... Contest A STRAND (1047) Sponsor Brian Strand N/A

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Shirley Hawkins

Date: 10/17/2021 4:07:00 PM

Many do not want to see this cruel illness.... I have two adult children who are mentally ill. it is heartbreaking to see them bravely trying to cope with a disability that has taken over their lives. Criminals are shown more understanding. Thank you, Ann for your very compassionate poem.It is very sad but true that the mentally ill will only have peace when they die.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/18/2021 10:19:00 PM

Oh dear Shirley I am so sorry to hear that; you are right it is utterly heartbreaking to witness as you as a parent want to take their pain away, but we can't and there often is no support from the outside world to help them as they struggle each day with this terrible condition. I send you much love dear friend and pray your children find the peace they need to live their lives. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/16/2021 11:51:00 AM

Delicate circuitry invariably shorts out from time to time - unnoticed even by the most capable repair personnel . . . . .

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/18/2021 10:14:00 PM

So true Rico and thanks so much for your visit. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 10/16/2021 7:34:00 AM

Much empathy and compassion in this tender write. Lovely done. xomo

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/18/2021 10:13:00 PM

Thank you so much IR for your lovely words, much appreciated. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/15/2021 10:09:00 PM

Very well depicted. Such illnesses are often hidden.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/18/2021 10:10:00 PM

Yes Victor this is so true. Thank you for your visit my friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Eve Roper

Date: 10/15/2021 8:15:00 PM

words of truth, people are good to pass judgement ... my mind stays in drive at all times to stop it for a while for rest would be a blessing. I think that comes with hyperness and grows with Anxiety

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/18/2021 10:11:00 PM

Yes no one knows what goes on inside our heads Eve, often exacerbated during the night... Take care my friend and thank you for your support. With kindest thoughts Ann xx