An Idyllic Place

With the fragrance of immaculate scents
And halos of cherubic hues around;
Divine thoughts whirl inside me and I vent
Sanguine words that unroll knowledge abound

Glimpses of angelic souls I perceive
Who nudge and empower the wilting mind
Tunes of euphoric rhythms I receive
Which make my unamiable heart kind

Betrayal, here is an outlandish deed 
Abhorrence, I have never confronted
With generous minds, also unblunted
Wise people here, spritz gently, largesse seeds

A day I spent in this idyllic place 
And so an abiding bliss, I embrace
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Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 5:00 PM
that last line really seals it nicely: abiding bliss!! Awesome, Supraja.
Horsman Avatar
September 9, 2021 at 10:34 PM
Love the visual aspect of this wonderful poetry.
Alex Avatar
September 8, 2021 at 8:04 AM
Very beautiful imagination and peaceful write. You have a very subtle way of putting minute positive vibrations.
Ball Avatar
September 7, 2021 at 1:55 PM
One word - Lovely. Thee is such peace in these wonderful words. It leaves the reader feeling content. Great job. God Bless, JB
Jayasankar Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Aw... if such an idyllic place ever exists, it must be surely a Heaven of Peace....and I surely would wish to be there... So beautiful dear Supraja... Have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
Trifiatis Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 7:46 AM
Heavenly write that uplifts the soul to the gardens of bliss! Blessings and hugs my dearest, Supraja! xxx
Pandit Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 6:02 AM
A stunning write--one of your best, Supraja. Much depth to your message in excellent vocabulary.
Buhagiar Avatar
September 6, 2021 at 5:35 AM
Great sonnet with a grand conclusion. Hugs.
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