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An Idyllic Place

With the fragrance of immaculate scents And halos of cherubic hues around; Divine thoughts whirl inside me and I vent Sanguine words that unroll knowledge abound Glimpses of angelic souls I perceive Who nudge and empower the wilting mind Tunes of euphoric rhythms I receive Which make my unamiable heart kind Betrayal, here is an outlandish deed Abhorrence, I have never confronted With generous minds, also unblunted Wise people here, spritz gently, largesse seeds A day I spent in this idyllic place And so an abiding bliss, I embrace

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Date: 9/11/2021 5:00:00 PM
that last line really seals it nicely: abiding bliss!! Awesome, Supraja.
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Date: 9/9/2021 10:34:00 PM
Love the visual aspect of this wonderful poetry.
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Date: 9/8/2021 8:04:00 AM
Very beautiful imagination and peaceful write. You have a very subtle way of putting minute positive vibrations.
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Date: 9/7/2021 1:55:00 PM
One word - Lovely. Thee is such peace in these wonderful words. It leaves the reader feeling content. Great job. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/6/2021 9:58:00 AM
Aw... if such an idyllic place ever exists, it must be surely a Heaven of Peace....and I surely would wish to be there... So beautiful dear Supraja... Have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/6/2021 7:46:00 AM
Heavenly write that uplifts the soul to the gardens of bliss! Blessings and hugs my dearest, Supraja! xxx
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Date: 9/6/2021 6:02:00 AM
A stunning write--one of your best, Supraja. Much depth to your message in excellent vocabulary.
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Date: 9/6/2021 5:35:00 AM
Great sonnet with a grand conclusion. Hugs.
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