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An Ideal World

This world is idyllic, warm, and blithe, Boundless life, endless keenness, No tears, no flusters, and no doom, New sky alternative earth, In addition to lasting life and light, Hopeful, peaceful blood ties, Hope the world is genuinely so brilliant?
Written: March 16, 2022 Bite Size Poem No.40 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Date: 3/18/2022 12:54:00 PM
Hope the world is genuinely so brilliant Lasaad, that would be relative to the observer at any given moment in time, but of course you know this already, I think this one is purposely tongue in cheek, which makes it more enjoyable, cheers David
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Date: 3/17/2022 4:11:00 AM
Much inspiration in your ideal world, Lasaad---No tears, no flusters, and no doom--hopeful, peaceful...
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