Sotto Poet Poet Free verse

An Ideal World

This world is idyllic, warm, and blithe,
Boundless life, endless keenness,
No tears, no flusters, and no doom,
New sky alternative earth,
In addition to lasting life and light,
Hopeful, peaceful blood ties,
Hope the world is genuinely so brilliant?

Written: March 16, 2022

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David Kavanagh March 18, 2022 at 12:54 PM Hope the world is genuinely so brilliant Lasaad, that would be relative to the observer at any given moment in time, but of course you know this already, I think this one is purposely tongue in cheek, which makes it more enjoyable, cheers David

Vijay Pandit March 17, 2022 at 4:11 AM Much inspiration in your ideal world, Lasaad---No tears, no flusters, and no doom--hopeful, peaceful...