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An Icy Temper

Sharp pellets of hail angrily slap at the earth pricking and provoking a chilly temper tantrum from dark, grumbling skies. Written on 11/2015

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/19/2015 5:32:00 PM

Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/19/2015 11:59:00 PM

Why, thank you, Sara! I appreciate your kind compliment :)

Skat A

Date: 11/14/2015 7:48:00 AM

Laura, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/14/2015 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, Skat :)

Michael Tor

Date: 11/13/2015 11:38:00 PM

Clever win Laura!!

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/14/2015 10:15:00 AM

Thanks Michael:)

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/13/2015 8:24:00 PM

I like the way you likened a winter storm to a temper tantrum! Creative work! Congrats on your win, Laura! Love, Kim

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/13/2015 9:28:00 PM

Thank you Kim! Glad you liked it :)

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 11/13/2015 3:04:00 PM

So original, this is great. Congrats. BG

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/13/2015 3:15:00 PM

Thank you, Barbara! I had fun with the theme :)

Jan Allison

Date: 11/13/2015 2:44:00 PM

Lovely taken on the winter theme - many congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/13/2015 3:14:00 PM

Thank you, Jan :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/10/2015 5:08:00 PM

Seems alot of my ex gf's where called "winter" never the less beautiful poem!

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/10/2015 5:36:00 PM

You may need to pick a sunny "summer" girl next time, Arthur, lol :)

Theresa Cw

Date: 11/10/2015 5:16:00 AM

Oh how I do love your take on this winter poem. Great luck Laura in contest. Reads like a winner in my eyes..... huggs Theresa

Laura Leiser
Date: 11/10/2015 11:05:00 AM

Thank you so much, Theresa, for enjoying my take on the contest! Who knows what the sponsor is looking for...we'll see :)