Laura Leiser Poet Verse

An Icy Temper

Sharp pellets of hail    
angrily slap at the earth                                                                
pricking and provoking
a chilly temper tantrum  
from dark, grumbling skies.



Written on 11/2015

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Sara Kendrick November 19, 2015 at 5:32 PM Winters come and winters go but this work will stand forever!!! Way to go with this win..Congrats..Sara Laura Leiser November 19, 2015 at 11:59 PM Why, thank you, Sara! I appreciate your kind compliment :)

Skat A November 14, 2015 at 7:48 AM Laura, Congratulations on your "Winter Dodoitsu Win." Luv SKAT Laura Leiser November 14, 2015 at 10:16 AM Thanks, Skat :)

Michael Tor November 13, 2015 at 11:38 PM Clever win Laura!! Laura Leiser November 14, 2015 at 10:15 AM Thanks Michael:)

Kim Merryman November 13, 2015 at 8:24 PM I like the way you likened a winter storm to a temper tantrum! Creative work! Congrats on your win, Laura! Love, Kim Laura Leiser November 13, 2015 at 9:28 PM Thank you Kim! Glad you liked it :)

Barbara Gorelick November 13, 2015 at 3:04 PM So original, this is great. Congrats. BG Laura Leiser November 13, 2015 at 3:15 PM Thank you, Barbara! I had fun with the theme :)

Jan Allison November 13, 2015 at 2:44 PM Lovely taken on the winter theme - many congrats Laura:-) hugs Jan xx Laura Leiser November 13, 2015 at 3:14 PM Thank you, Jan :)

Arthur Vaso November 10, 2015 at 5:08 PM Seems alot of my ex gf's where called "winter" never the less beautiful poem! Laura Leiser November 10, 2015 at 5:36 PM You may need to pick a sunny "summer" girl next time, Arthur, lol :)

Theresa Cw November 10, 2015 at 5:16 AM Oh how I do love your take on this winter poem. Great luck Laura in contest. Reads like a winner in my eyes..... huggs Theresa Laura Leiser November 10, 2015 at 11:05 AM Thank you so much, Theresa, for enjoying my take on the contest! Who knows what the sponsor is looking for...we'll see :)