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AN HOUR TUMBLES

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The clock coughs twice—a phlegmy tick~ We wrench its hands with clumsy might. An hour tumbles, lost from sight. Like dentures down the kitchen sink. *“Daylight saving time (DST) is the practice of setting clocks forward by one hour in the spring to extend evening daylight during the warmer months, and then setting them back by one hour in the autumn….In the United States, DST begins on the second Sunday in March and ends on the first Sunday in November…The concept was first suggested by Benjamin Franklin in 1784.,The first widespread implementation occurred during World War I to conserve fuel.” (Source: Wikipedia.com)
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Hind Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 6:38 PM
Wow. You did this very well. It's deep for the subject matter.
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:47 PM
many thanks, Paige. What uplifting and encouraging words!
Maverick Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 3:28 PM
An idea of human clumsiness, juxtaposed with ingenuity.' Whispers to me.. Intruigingly.)
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:48 PM
glad my poem whispered 'intrigue' ...thanks for stopping by
Gauthier Avatar
November 1, 2025 at 6:21 AM
Deligthful poem ~ a pleasure to read
Etgen-Baker Avatar
November 2, 2025 at 5:48 PM
thank you, kindly, Line
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