An Hour Glass Mom -W

An hour glass mom (revised)

                                              I do not like wearing
                                            oversized        clothes,
                                          I   am a modern mom   of
                                           21st century. I would like
                                             To be one of the hour
                                                     glass moms.
                                                      I would hit
                                                     The gym  to
                                                    shed  of  soft
                                      fats that I may put on during my
                              pregnancy. I do not like wearing oversized
                              clothes. Never depend upon   the household
                            chores to eat the foods I would rather be choosy.
                           I would like to be one of the hour glass moms.
                              If I happen to be one of the caesareans, will hit
                                     the gym to heal the stitches safely. I do
                                        not like wearing oversized clothes.
                                         For a svelte figure I would do all
                                      all the things, despite having a hectic
                                      job I would like to be one of the hour
                                      hour glass moms  I would get back to
                                    socialite evenings    and feel great getting
                                      into my old               clothes. I do not
                                      wearing my                oversized clothes
                                      I would                         rather be one
                                    of the hour                      glass moms.                            
                                 
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Seventh Placement
Contest: Complete Concrete
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 24, 2010 at 1:38 PM
So artistic! I think this expresses the sentiments of many moms--yet we do the best with what we've got. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on your win in Amy's contest. Keep that creativity flowing! Karen
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May 24, 2010 at 12:45 PM
Really good one, Doc! You could probably enter this one in the "Battle of the Bulge" contest as well. Very funny! Congrats!
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May 24, 2010 at 12:41 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem with this unique design in Amy's contest... wonderful words to compliment the outline... enjoy another sweet victory..with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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May 14, 2010 at 8:55 AM
This is a great Shape form and quite a busty hourglass ... LOL ... wonderful write here, Doctor ... unfortunately some of us after turning 50 (or was it 60) get a shape that doesn't change no matter how much we exercise ... LOL ... thanks for all your recent comments ... I'm late with most of mine ... smile ... Hope you have lots of sunshine and a wonderful weekend!!
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May 13, 2010 at 6:45 AM
You got it, gosh, you had to work on that one, these concrete forms can be tricky... best of luck in the contest.. love constance
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May 12, 2010 at 8:52 PM
Good luck Dr. Ram.. it will take a while for Soup to resolve the major problems on this site as there is way too much volume for the type of system Soup has ... hopefully it will be resolved in the future... nice design for Amy's contest... glad I could be of some help to u..luv.. from the "Sweetheart"
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