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An Haiku' S Sunlit Feathers

O Butterfly! colour collage
From butter to fly
You coined your name
Paired wings
Your wings though fixed
Adapt to wind
It flaps to fly
Into thin sky
Pollen folk
Stigma scented
Fairy wings
O Butterfly!
From butter to fly
You curved your name
Flowering bouquet
Rainbows mix


1st Place  Win 
Kia  Michael Neumann's 
butter flies and marshes mellow premiere contest


1ST Place Win
BRIAN'S CHOICE W,any form,any theme
5/26/2020


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V. Deepa Date: 7/27/2020 7:16:00 AM Hi Gideon brother, Beautiful blend of words describing butterfly.Your sheer muse brought a trophy win. Am happy for you :-) keep writing and keep inspiring:-)Hope your keeping well. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa:-) Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 7/30/2020 8:24:00 PM Thanks a lot Deepa Keep safe.

Aditi Mishra Date: 7/26/2020 11:43:00 AM I am so happy to see the trophy next to your muse my friend. Your muse is really soothing and gorgeous. Congratulations on your top win Gideon. Blessings :) Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 7/30/2020 8:25:00 PM Aditi Am grateful thanks for your comments

P.M. Richter Date: 7/17/2020 12:55:00 PM Wow. That was beyond phenomenal! Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 7/19/2020 3:32:00 PM Interesting comments Richter

Brenda Chiri Date: 7/16/2020 4:45:00 PM This was amazing piece congrats on your #1 win!;) Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 7/17/2020 12:23:00 PM Nice to have you back on Poetry soup... Brenda Long time no see!! Welcome back Thanks for the comments God ...bless

John Watt Date: 7/16/2020 12:08:00 PM Gideon, it was wonderful to read of your ode to butterflies today. They are a wonder to behold, and inspiring to the beauty-loving eye. Well done, and congratulations on your #1 win ~ John Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 7/16/2020 2:51:00 PM Thanks John ...very grateful pleased having you around on poetry soup as a pal Thanks alot

Kim Rodrigues Date: 7/16/2020 11:49:00 AM Fairy wings O butterfly! Congratulations on your top win! Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 7/16/2020 2:53:00 PM Yah ...thanks Kim For your comments And for reading my poem.

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 7/16/2020 7:32:00 AM Nice write of butterflies...congrats on the top win. Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 7/16/2020 7:50:00 AM Wow! Thanks Jeanne kind words!

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 7/16/2020 4:42:00 AM Congratulations on your special win in my contest. Your poem is most enjoyable and paints a beautiful picture to cherish. Kind regards, Kai Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 7/16/2020 7:51:00 AM Interesting Kia ..thanks a lot a...God bless Very please

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/18/2020 5:27:00 AM Your gorgeous words paint a beautiful picture Gideon. Congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 6/18/2020 10:45:00 AM Thanks Aditi God bless

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 6/18/2020 4:09:00 AM A very beautiful write, Gideon, with some stunning imagery - congrats on your multiple wins with this beauty! Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 6/18/2020 4:45:00 AM Bless You From a grateful heart

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/18/2020 3:54:00 AM I just love to see them Flutter around the garden in summer time, Congratulations on your win. Tom Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 6/18/2020 4:46:00 AM Thanks to You Appreciation Goes to Tom.

Susan Ashley Date: 6/17/2020 8:43:00 PM Gideon, this is such a glorious celebration of thought and imagery, rhythm and rhymes exalting the beauty of "pollen folk" (love that!).. your words dance upon the page with the flitting lightness of a butterfly. Simply stunning. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Chantelle's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 6/18/2020 1:09:00 AM Thanks a lot Susan Grateful heart goes to you

Amelia Harrell Date: 5/27/2020 12:02:00 AM A vivid description of a beautiful butterfly :D Login to Reply Gideon Idudje Date: 5/27/2020 5:11:00 AM Thanks