Gideon Idudje Poet Haiku

An Haiku' S Sunlit Feathers

O Butterfly! colour collage
From butter to fly
You coined your name
Paired wings
Your wings though fixed
Adapt to wind
It flaps to fly
Into thin sky
Pollen folk
Stigma scented
Fairy wings
O Butterfly!
From butter to fly
You curved your name
Flowering bouquet
Rainbows mix


1st Place  Win 
Kia  Michael Neumann's 
butter flies and marshes mellow premiere contest


1ST Place Win
BRIAN'S CHOICE W,any form,any theme
5/26/2020


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V. Deepa July 27, 2020 at 7:16 AM Hi Gideon brother, Beautiful blend of words describing butterfly.Your sheer muse brought a trophy win. Am happy for you :-) keep writing and keep inspiring:-)Hope your keeping well. Take care.Warmest regards~Deepa:-) Gideon Idudje July 30, 2020 at 8:24 PM Thanks a lot Deepa Keep safe.

Aditi Mishra July 26, 2020 at 11:43 AM I am so happy to see the trophy next to your muse my friend. Your muse is really soothing and gorgeous. Congratulations on your top win Gideon. Blessings :) Gideon Idudje July 30, 2020 at 8:25 PM Aditi Am grateful thanks for your comments

Paul Marc July 17, 2020 at 12:55 PM Wow. That was beyond phenomenal! Gideon Idudje July 19, 2020 at 3:32 PM Interesting comments Richter

Brenda Chiri July 16, 2020 at 4:45 PM This was amazing piece congrats on your #1 win!;) Gideon Idudje July 17, 2020 at 12:23 PM Nice to have you back on Poetry soup... Brenda Long time no see!! Welcome back Thanks for the comments God ...bless

John Watt July 16, 2020 at 12:08 PM Gideon, it was wonderful to read of your ode to butterflies today. They are a wonder to behold, and inspiring to the beauty-loving eye. Well done, and congratulations on your #1 win ~ John Gideon Idudje July 16, 2020 at 2:51 PM Thanks John ...very grateful pleased having you around on poetry soup as a pal Thanks alot

Kim Rodrigues July 16, 2020 at 11:49 AM Fairy wings O butterfly! Congratulations on your top win! Gideon Idudje July 16, 2020 at 2:53 PM Yah ...thanks Kim For your comments And for reading my poem.

Jeanne Mcgee July 16, 2020 at 7:32 AM Nice write of butterflies...congrats on the top win. Gideon Idudje July 16, 2020 at 7:50 AM Wow! Thanks Jeanne kind words!

Kai Michael Neumann July 16, 2020 at 4:42 AM Congratulations on your special win in my contest. Your poem is most enjoyable and paints a beautiful picture to cherish. Kind regards, Kai Gideon Idudje July 16, 2020 at 7:51 AM Interesting Kia ..thanks a lot a...God bless Very please

Aditi Mishra June 18, 2020 at 5:27 AM Your gorgeous words paint a beautiful picture Gideon. Congratulations on your win :) Gideon Idudje June 18, 2020 at 10:45 AM Thanks Aditi God bless

Gregory Richard Barden June 18, 2020 at 4:09 AM A very beautiful write, Gideon, with some stunning imagery - congrats on your multiple wins with this beauty! Gideon Idudje June 18, 2020 at 4:45 AM Bless You From a grateful heart

Tom Cunningham June 18, 2020 at 3:54 AM I just love to see them Flutter around the garden in summer time, Congratulations on your win. Tom Gideon Idudje June 18, 2020 at 4:46 AM Thanks to You Appreciation Goes to Tom.

Susan Ashley June 17, 2020 at 8:43 PM Gideon, this is such a glorious celebration of thought and imagery, rhythm and rhymes exalting the beauty of "pollen folk" (love that!).. your words dance upon the page with the flitting lightness of a butterfly. Simply stunning. Congratulations on your wonderful win in Chantelle's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan Gideon Idudje June 18, 2020 at 1:09 AM Thanks a lot Susan Grateful heart goes to you

Amelia Harrell May 27, 2020 at 12:02 AM A vivid description of a beautiful butterfly :D Gideon Idudje May 27, 2020 at 5:11 AM Thanks