Michael J. Falotico Poet Free verse

An Eye On Me

~Spirit Eye (Third Eye Perception) contest~



                                                 Seems throughout my life when it came 
                                                     to making choices of good and bad
                                                 there always seemed to be another view..
                                                I could always feel that a voice or presence
                                               in my mind saying think first and step wisely.
                                              Never sure if it is or was a higher feeling or just
                                               my conscience pulling me in the right direction.
                                            From a child looking to steal a piece of bubble gum,
                                            or a young teenager tempted to test an illegal drug.
                                         To a young man deciding to take the easy way to make
                                              money or work a real job and with peace mind.
                                          Who ever you are I thank you for constant eye on me.

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Doris Culverhouse February 6, 2011 at 2:49 PM Great perception to have. I should have listened to my inner holy spirit more.

Carolyn Devonshire February 6, 2011 at 9:18 AM It must be your spirit eye that is guiding you as you try to make choices, Michael. God is always sending us messages and He could easily be perceived as the Third Eye. Great entry for the contest and Soup mail in a moment. Love, Carolyn

Dana Smith February 6, 2011 at 9:11 AM Wonderful as always, Michael. I enjoyed reading your poetry today. I give it a seven. Looking forward to reading more. Dana'lynn

Nette Onclaud February 6, 2011 at 8:33 AM smokin', michael... delighted to read this super fascinating piece on this frgile voice we call intuition or enlightened insight.. win, win!! :) huggs, nette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart February 6, 2011 at 7:21 AM Such depth to this write my White Knight .. nice to thank those who impacted our lives in this beautiful way Michael.. touching thoughts my friend.. we are having family ..that is a house full already.. and two other couples over for our 'party'... for S.B.S. and Ron is all decked out in his Rothleisburger jersey... and glass of wine...haha.. so it will be a fun day.. but I tend to lean toward G.B. ..they are two point favorites going in.. enjoy luv.. Jersey Girl in football mode..

Michael J. Falotico February 6, 2011 at 6:39 AM A poem from always being at a fork in the road and being led the right way, but not always listening sadly at a younger age... Hope you enjoy my life maped out in this write...Michael