Omar Jabak Poet Verse

An Existing Half

I thought I was born
a perfect all, 
With many things at
my beck and call. 
Days went by and I
became me
I thought it was all
I wanted to be.
I turned forty and
looked back
To see the other
half I still lack.
My whole life has
been a half, 
Of an all I feel not
enough.
As I age and
approach my timely
end,
The other half, my
Lord prepares to
send.

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Sara Kendrick October 28, 2013 at 5:50 AM Yes, there is that perfect half for you out there..Enjoyed reading your creative work.Sara Omar Jabak October 28, 2013 at 5:56 AM Thank you, Sara, for your kind compliment. I am glad you enjoyed reading my poem.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri October 28, 2013 at 4:44 AM Indeed somewhere she must exist though u might b late. A super rhyming excellent poem, great flow too! Pls coment my latest poem. (indian i am). Omar Jabak October 28, 2013 at 4:53 AM Thank you for your nice comment. I will read your poem and leave a comment.