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An Existential Curiosity

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Anti-intellectualism may breed anti-curiosity. Harsh reality can frustrate existential sternness. They tied backlash against "mere" curiosity. Yet, every human behavior has a purpose. Conveying a full breakdown of all the key sights. Tangling, multiplying tendrils sepia from white. My character has changed significantly already. Rhododendron in blooming; existentialist edgy The moon pendulum is at its most vulnerable. Strong, direct sunlight makes vivacity visible. Recognizing oneself in the gaze of the Other. Transtemporal throws ages in a shadow cover. Romance, paraphyllium, and aurora snow, harvest moon, opaline luster, and coral glow. Eurasian plant calyxes with spicate bloom. Five stars in the sky; a red glow in the gloom. Wake up, mystery, and join me on Mars. Latte, belt out a song that heals my scars. Opal in black, a ruby for the crown gem, Is that thunder? You infer my heart hem. Is this a dream, upon a shimmering silver sky? Antsy flow, a phantasmagoria of my avow mind. Chimes in Venice, a piercing stare into my eye, as though we've always been close, my kind. Sparkle up the universe and unveil thyself. Moon wake, I'm steering my rise from a shelf. Who were we if not to serve the whole world? How do we fathom where we'll be stirred? The darkness shrouded the vision of man. Scattering flies at dawn since they had begun. We face the share of the world with blackness. Having to push and shove away the darkness.
1St Place Contest Winner Written: December 18, 2022 This or That, Vol 15 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Edward Ibeh Your Favourite Rhyming Poem From The Second Half Of 2022 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Julia Ward

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Date: 1/18/2023 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations dear Lasaad on your well deserved First place win in Edward's contest. Enjoy your day
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Date: 1/18/2023 1:09:00 PM
Just spectacular! Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest, Lasaad.
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Date: 12/19/2022 6:17:00 AM
Human curiosity leads to innovations. Intriguing journey on the wings of your imagination my friend.
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Date: 12/18/2022 11:26:00 PM
Without doubt humans are curious by nature and keep looking under the stones for answers, some he finds some he don't, but he never gives up looking. Tom
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Date: 12/18/2022 8:35:00 PM
Our vision is shrouded in darkness and the world continues to be a puzzling mystery. We wish to see the universe sparkling up and unveiling itself. We have a curiosity to see the reality behind the phantasmagoria....! The universe is a wonder and you have described it in amazing images...."harvest moon, opaline luster, and coral glow". Great descriptions. All the Best in the contest!
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