An Exercise
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This is as the title says: an exercise, in the use of one prolonged metaphor from the first to the last line. Hope you like it :)
fringed rifts tear
aside a curtain
ragged with light
stage is prepared
soft murmurs
grow into roars
voice raises to
a deafening scream
that erupts and whips
waters with
thundering applause
***
September 10, 2017
Copyright © Darren White
Copyright © Darren White | Year Posted 2017
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