This is as the title says: an exercise, in the use of one prolonged metaphor from the first to the last line. Hope you like it :)
fringed rifts tear aside a curtain ragged with light stage is prepared soft murmurs grow into roars voice raises to a deafening scream that erupts and whips waters with thundering applause *** September 10, 2017 Copyright © Darren White
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