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An Excavation

They excavated him, her youngest son, who passed away too soon at age nineteen, to join her second son, who had just died at fifty-five- to the new hollowed plot. There, side-by-side- together, brothers slept neath velvet grass, under a graceful tree, where she would leave her flowers and her tears; a mother's love for them would always be. No way would she have come to realize- three years from when she joined her precious sons- another excavation would take place- where she would rest with them eternally. One plot, three graves- a mother and two sons- a final excavation- filled with love. July 1, 2021 Contest: This Or That, Vol 4 Sponsor: Edward Ibeh Unrhymed Sonnet (true story)

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Date: 7/27/2021 10:27:00 PM
A beautiful Creation. Congratulations!
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Date: 7/1/2021 3:26:00 PM
A sad verse Sandra, bereavement and loss are so hard to deal with. Tom
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Date: 7/1/2021 10:20:00 AM
aww what a sad sonnet indeed by they lie together in eternal peace, hugs jan xx
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Date: 7/1/2021 9:37:00 AM
Sadness seeps from the sonnet, Sandra.
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